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Steve Davies

I stared in awe at the door. I had edited it after it had been edited.

That should be impossible under the old rules.

I glanced down at my phone. At the increased abilities of my editing app. My heart pounded in my chest as this rush shot through me. I’d doubled my number edits for the day. After my new modifications, the door showed itself as unlocked from editing. It was like I had greater admin privileges or something. I could edit a lesser version of the app’s changes.

“Damn,” I said.

“You… you…” Anael quivered before me. My angel panted, her body flushed. Her purple eyes gleamed as she stared at me. My cum dribbled down her thighs. “You’re amazing, my Lord.”

I’d edited my angel, too.

I had changed her loyalties to me as well as activating my phone’s abilities. She fell to her knees before me and engulfed my cock with her hungry mouth. She sucked her pussy juices off my dick while staring up at me with such love in the purple depths of her eyes. Her cheeks hollowed. Her tongue darted around my cock.

Pleasure surged through me. My balls tightened. I groaned, my heart pumping hot blood through me. She nursed with a feverish hunger. Her hands gripped my thighs. Her fingers clenched. She dug into me as she worshiped me hard.

I smiled at what I’d done. I’d won. I had Seth now. If I could edit the door, I could edit him. I had two more edits for the day. I smiled as I surged. My passion echoed through the small room that he’d sought to trap me in. I glanced at my time-paused wife. She had a mask of fear on her face.

She wasn’t in danger any longer.

Neither was my secretary, Imogene. She hugged herself tight. She looked confused and on the verge of panic, her brown eyes filling with tears. Seth wouldn’t hurt us. He wouldn’t get his hands on my eldest daughter.

Anael sucked hard. She bobbed her head. Her lips worked up and down my cock. I groaned as I stared down at her. All I had to do was edit the angel. It was incredible. My heart pumped hot blood through my body.

An idea popped into my head.

“What’s the name of Seth’s angel?” I asked.

Anael slid her mouth off my cock. “Jophiel, the Angel of Illumination.” A wicked smile crossed her lips. “I’m not supposed to tell you that, but… You are amazing, my Lord.”

“I changed your loyalties,” I told her.

“Mmm, you don’t know what you’ve done,” she said. “It’s bold. I love it.” She licked the end of my cock, fluttering her tongue around the sensitive crown.

“What’s Jophiel’s real name?”

“Sophia,” she moaned. “Angel of Illumination and Wisdom.”

I smiled and closed the app.

Reality lurched back into motion. Anael vanished.

“Did you find something?” my wife asked, her voice strained. “Did you… Did you fuck your angel? You’re naked. Hard. Your cock looks soaked in pussy.”

“Angel?” Imogene asked, her voice creaking. “What’s going on, Mr. Davies?” Then she squeaked in shock, “Where did your clothes go?”

“I’ve won,” I told my wife.

Her green eyes widened. She shuddered as her hands swayed before her. “Really?”

I nodded. I felt so different. Six edits a day. I could override any edits I’d done. I could fix any mistakes I’d made.

“You’ve truly won?” my wife asked. “We’re getting—”

My phone rang. I knew it would. Seth would be watching me on his app. I swiped the screen and brought it to my ear. “Hello, Seth.”

“You think you’ve won?” Seth asked, amusement in his voice. I pictured the young man in his bedroom, leaned back, relaxed and confident in his victory. “I would love to hear how you’ve done it. How you think you’re getting out of there.”

“You made a mistake,” I answered, all the tension gone from my voice. I rode the high of my orgasm and my triumph. My victory was assured. A hot tremble raced through me. Exhilaration pumped through my veins. It was so hard not to shout out in delight.

I fought against it, savoring my victory.

“A mistake?” Seth asked. He didn’t sound worried. “Please, Mr. Davies, enlighten me. I’ve spent all of my time thinking this through. Unlike you, I haven’t been rutting with every slut I can stick my dick in.”

“Pity,” I said. “You could have been having fun instead of this pointless fighting.”

“I can have fun after you’ve given up your edits,” he said. “So, what’s my mistake. I’m patient. It’s not like you’re going anywhere.”

“See, you didn’t make me use up all my edits before springing your trap,” I said. “That was my plan. To put obstacles in place that would force you to use your edits three times before I sprang my forces on you.”

“Didn’t need to,” Seth said. “There’s nothing in that room that you can edit to help you escape, and no force on earth that could get through the walls, floor, ceiling, or door. What, did you edit someone to come put a gun to my head and force me to give up my powers?”

“I’m not someone who likes violence or guns,” I said. “Besides, you have the protection aura. It wouldn’t work.”

“So, who did you edit?” Seth sounded so amused. “Tell me what I’ve overlooked.”

“Did you know you can edit your angel?” I asked.

Seth didn’t answer. His breathing grew heavier. I pictured him frozen. “What?”

“Of course, you have to figure out the password,” I said. “And I know your angel’s password.”

Before he could answer, I pulled my phone from my ear. I hung up and opened the editing app, freezing reality.

Anael appeared, still kneeling before me. She swallowed my cock, her purple eyes staring up at me as I searched for Jophiel. The view screen portion of the app switched over to Seth’s room. Jophiel was by him. Lurking around him. When I opened her profile, the nude image of her form appeared in that section of the app.

She was a black-haired woman with topaz eyes. She appeared to be Anael’s opposite in every way. Busty and curvy, but there was no sexuality about her. She didn’t ooze lust and delight. Her eyes were soft and full of wisdom. There was a beatific aura about her.

• Jophiel (PASSWORD PROTECTED)
  • Physical
  • Mental
  • Spiritual

I navigated through her menus, Spiritual Menu to Relationship Sub-Menu. Like with Anael, the Most High was the angel’s top relationship followed by Seth. My name wasn’t even on her list.

I inserted myself at the top of her list.

• Steve Davies is Sophia’s master. The one she answers to above all others, even the Most High. She loves him and wants only the best for him.

I smiled as I typed that, loving the feel of Anael sucking on my dick. I backed out of the Relationship Sub-Menu. I pondered where my next change would lay in her menu. There had to be something in her profile that controlled who’d she given her app to. Sophia was a conduit like Anael.

I had to shift where that power flowed.

If I understood things, the moment Seth lost his powers, everything he did would be reset. This room, those strange anime girls, more. Where did those anime girls come from? I shook my head, he had created them somehow. But so many of them…

I had to know. I pulled out of Sophia menu. I wouldn’t lose any changes to Sophia to go investigate. I opened up the map and found one of the anime girls attacking city hall. It was someone named Amasaki Mio. She wasn’t edited, which I found absolutely fascinating. I navigated to her History Sub-Menu.

• Drawn into existence by James Davies.
• Marveled at her new existence and is eager to please.
• Pleasured her first client, Stefan Roydon, and enjoyed herself immensely pleasing him.
• Returned to her paper to dream.

My son created her? I went to her Relationship Sub-Menu. The top one was Seth Meyers.

• I am loyal to Seth Meyers even to death. I will do anything to make him happy above all others. He wants me to obey him. He wants me to be a good geisha and please all the customers of Dreamgirl Delights. He wants me to be happy and fun and flirty and sexy.

How did James create her? I switched over to my son. I went to his History Sub-Menu. I had to navigate through all his memories of today, including my inauguration, his date last night with his two girlfriends, including their various sexual encounters, then I reached a threesome he had with a girl with a strange name, Sakuraba Aoi. The memory before that was him creating her.

• James finishes inking Sakuraba Aoi with his Coptic Marker and focuses on her coming to life. She appears before him eager to give him a reward.

“Coptic marker…” I muttered, Anael bobbing her mouth up and down my cock. She stared up at me as I unraveled this shyster.

I had to search for this marker. My son had lots of Coptic markers. He used them to create his art. But one of them was edited by Seth Meyers. I found it and read the profile. Seth had changed its properties, enchanting it to never run out of ink, to change the tip so it would draw at whatever line thickness my son needed, and to bring to life anything James drew so long as he willed it to exist. There was a caveat that any beings created this way would be loyal to Seth Meyers.

I scrolled through my son’s history. He’d been drawing almost non-stop. When I was having fun, my son was being used by Seth. I thought my son was having fun, enjoying life outside of his bedroom for once. I let him have his space, and Seth used him.

I groaned when I read that my son thought he was a God because I created his two girlfriends.

Seth used that arrogance.

“That little bastard,” I growled.

I switched back to Jophiel. I had to finish my edits. I had to take apart Seth’s power and ensure my family wouldn’t be messed with. I had a hunch what I needed was found beneath the Spiritual Menu.

• Spiritual
  • Sexuality
  • Faith
  • Morality
  • Social

I browsed down the list and smiled when I realized where it would be. I felt like an idiot since I had already been in that menu. I opened Relationship Sub-Menu and selected Seth Meyers.

• Sophia chose Seth Meyers to hold her power.
• Sophia sees Seth Meyers as being someone that she found intelligent and she could guide to make wise and studious decisions. He is within the sphere of Steve Davies and has the motivation to oppose him. Sophia believes he will make the best game for the entertainment of Heaven and the Most High.
• Sophia respects Seth Meyers. He often asks for her opinion. She enjoys guiding him in his plan to defeat Steve Davies.

I deleted her ever having given her power to Seth Meyers. I backed up to my inserted relationship.

• Sophia chose Steve Davies to hold her power despite Most High’s orders.
• Sophia sees giving Steve Davies the power the ultimate proof of her love and desire to serve him over all others.

I shuddered as I won. This would stop Seth from ever getting powers. Everything would change. His horde of anime girls would never have been created. I frowned at that. A shiver ran through me as the weight of that hit me. I swallowed. Did I have the right to erase them out of existence? Unless…

I could edit the pen. I could change it so that they were still drawn.

I had to do that first. I had to preserve those girls’ lives. Orihime and Ruri were real people. They might have come about artificially, but they had passion. Life. They were flesh and blood. They had their own personalities. It didn’t matter how they were created. How they came into being.

They deserved to live. Everyone deserved to have happiness and peace.

I switched over to the Coptic Marker.

• Ciao Coptic Marker (Black) (Last Edited by Player 2)
  • Physical Quality
  • Spiritual Quality

I kept it all the same but changed its history so that I had edited it, and that James still drew all those girls. But not for Seth’s pleasure. He created them to be loyal to our family. To help us out. With my new power, things would change. I would need loyal people to help me run things. I didn’t have to edit these girls to make them dedicated to us. They would help run city hall. They would be eager to serve everyone in my family. They would take such joy in it.

They weren’t my ideal servants, but I was sure they would grow on me. They were all beautiful girls. Sam would love them. She was into a lot of the same things as my son. I smiled as I finished my editing, adding one more thing.

• James doesn’t think he’s a god because he can create sentient beings but is thrilled that he has the power and will use it responsibly. He consulted with his father who encouraged him to create all these girls.

I set that edit in place. Next, I had to ensure that I would remain mayor. I had the edit to do it. I found the machine that had printed the ballets that Seth had edited to make me win. I edited in the same way and hit changes.

Finally, I returned to Jophiel. I went over everything, making sure nothing had reverted while I made my other changes. Everything was in place. I trembled as I Anael sucked at my cock. She stared up at me.

“Ready to win?” I asked her. She sucked and slurped. She bobbed her head faster, loving me. My balls tightened as I pressed the Compile button.

or

I hit YES and trembled as reality rippled from my phone.

The world wavered and grew blurry. It was a more powerful distortion then I had ever seen. It bent and contorted. It wavered. The brick walls around me, lit only by my phone’s blue screen, seemed to merge with another location. I couldn’t see anything clearly. I felt like I had moved. Like I was somewhere else. My wife’s position shifted. She appeared in a new pose and…

My wife was sitting on my desk in the mayor’s office, naked. Imogene was beside her, the two kissing, their faces coated in my cum. I shuddered, standing by them as reality returned to normal. There were other naked girls in the room. The anime girls looking ready to serve with bright smiles on their faces.

Anael still sucked my cock. She nursed with hunger on, my dick. I groaned, my phone vibrating heavenly in my hand. It grew warm like it was overworking. I shuddered, shaking my head, confused why we were here and…

Seth’s girls never attacked. We had no reason to be in the escape tunnel. I smiled. This reality would be so different than I remembered. Tonya would never have started dating Seth. Becky would never have the temptation to cheat on me while Sam would never have her faith in her love for me shaken.

Did Sam even know about my powers now?

Probably not. I should come clean with my family now.

My phone vibrated in my hand. I looked at the number of edits I had left. I should have none.

Instead, I had six.

Jophiel appeared before me. The busty angel’s eyes were wide. They were soft the shade of topazes. She trembled as she fell to her knees before me. She shook her head. It was clear she remembered the original timeline, that she knew this wasn’t the choice she had originally made. Like Anael and myself, she was immune from those effects.

“What have you done, my Lord?” Jophiel asked. “You’ve broken the rules.”

“Have I?” My balls tightened. Anael’s sucking was bringing me to the brink. “I just edited reality. I was given the power by the Most high. I used it.”

Anael sucked with such enthusiasm. I groaned and then erupted. My cum fired into her mouth. I threw back my head and groaned as the pleasure surged out of me. This amazing rapture slammed through my body.

I had won.

My cum boiled out of my cock. This powerful bliss in me pulsed with each eruption. I groaned as the pleasure pumped out of my dick. This amazing rapture set my blood on fire. Ecstasy slammed through my mind. My jizz spurted again and again.

“Anael!” I growled, staring into her purple eyes. “Thank you.”

She whimpered and sucked the cum out of my balls. My pleasure peaked as the last of my jizz spurted into her hungry mouth. She popped her mouth off of me and stared up at me with such glossy lust in her eyes.

“You’re welcome, my Lord.” She smiled. “I am glad you figured out my clues. I wanted you to win, but I had to play by the rules.”

“Now I make your rules,” I said. I glanced at Jophiel. “Right?”

“Of course, my Lord.” Her cheeks blushed. Her naked breasts shivered. “I… I am not used to feeling sexual desire, my Lord, but…”

“He’s a horny perv,” said Anael. She bounded to her feet. “Mmm, so, you’ve unlocked your phone to the next level. You can edit larger entities now.”

“Larger entities?”

“Say… a municipality,” she said. “An entire organization.”

“I can edit the entire city of Rainier?” I asked, shocked. The idea staggered me. I grabbed my phone and typed in Rainier, Washington and… A map of the town appeared on the side of the screen, showing the city boundaries.

• City of Rainier, King County, State of Washington, The United States of America
  • Population
  • Physical Quality
  • Spiritual Quality

I stared at the profile in awe. I looked at it.

“This is insane,” I said, moving to my chair. It creaked beneath me as I flicked through the options. There were new menus I hadn’t seen. I tapped the Population Menu.

• Population
• Demographics
• Fertility Rates
• Health Rate
• Gender Ratio

I stared at the options, the level of control I had. I could change the Demographics of the city, the Fertility Rate. I blinked at that. Gender Ratio.

“Damn,” I muttered, backing out of this menu and hitting the Physical Quality Menu.

• Physical Quality
  • Building Codes
  • Transportation
  • Infrastructure
  • Property
  • Environment
  • Location

I blinked at it. Then I smiled when I saw some of the options. I hit the Environmental Sub-Menu.

• Environment
  • Air Quality
  • Water Quality
  • Land Quality

I loved it. I could make Rainier a perfect place. A paradise. This was amazing. I went back to the main menu and hit the Spiritual Quality Sub-Menu.

• Spiritual Quality
  • History
  • Government
  • Sexuality-Female
  • Sexuality-Male
  • Faith
  • Morality
  • Aura

There were so many new options. The sexuality of my citizens, their faith, their morality. There was even an Aura Menu.

“I can make this town into what I want,” I groaned. It was overwhelming. It was something I would have to think about carefully. “This is…”

“I know,” Anael said. “You have earned it. You have won the contest.”

“Yes, you have, my Lord,” Jophiel said, her nipples hard atop her large breasts. She swallowed. “I will advise you on the best options to make a happy society. But know that it takes six uses to edit a large object.”

“Yep,” Anael said. “Ooh, we could make this place into a city-wide orgy. Just imagine all the fun your citizens could have.”

“There is more to life than sex,” Jophiel said.

“Nothing that’s better,” Anael said. Her purple eyes gleamed.

“I have to think about this,” I said. I glanced at my wife locked in the kiss. “I have to talk to my wife.”

“Of course, my Lord,” Jophiel said. “I am at your disposal, lurking around you at all times. I will be here when you are ready.”

“Yep,” said Anael. She grinned. “Heaven must be in an uproar. Ooh, I love it. You are amazing, my Lord. I love you so much.”

“Yes, my heart is beating hard and fast,” Jophiel said. “It is a new sensation. Oh, my.” She fanned her flushing face.

I closed the app.

My wife broke the kiss and shuddered. She glanced at me, this bright smile on her face. She wouldn’t remember anything about Seth being our enemy. That we even had an enemy. She hadn’t been stressing out about Seth over the last week. It must have been just exciting for her. She clearly was enjoying herself, celebrating that I was the mayor.

She glanced at my phone. “Oh, did you…”

“We have to talk,” I said, grinning. “But I won.”

“Yes, you did,” she purred. “You wanted to be mayor, and you made it happen. I love it. You are amazing.”

“He is, Mrs. Davies,” Imogene said, her face dripping with cum.

“Things are going to change,” I said. “We’re going to make Rainier into a paradise.”

“Yes!” my wife moaned. She had no idea. I’d tell her as soon as we were alone. She should still know about my powers even if she had no idea about Seth. She shifted on the desk, her eyes gleaming with delight. She spread her thighs, her red bush gleaming right before my face.

I licked my lips, eager to celebrate my victory. Linda didn’t know how much I’d just overcome. She didn’t even remember her terror from only moments ago. Reality had changed again, but the important things were still the same.

My wife loved me. I loved her.

“Mmm, Mr. Mayor,” she purred, staring at my cock. She rubbed her foot up and down it. “Ooh, you’re just so powerful. I’m helpless to resist. You can do anything to me.”

“Ooh, ravish her, Mr. Davies.”

The naked anime girls around us all nodded their heads and murmured. There were six of them in the room. I bet more were scattered throughout city hall while others would be around our house. They would be our servants.

I had to admit that they were sexy. My son knew how to create beautiful women.

“Mmm, so what do you want to do to me, Mr. Mayor?” she moaned. “What you say is law.”

“Uh-huh,” Imogene moaned. She wrapped her arms around my wife’s body, hugging her from behind. Imogene’s brown hair rubbed into my wife’s auburn locks. My secretary licked the cum off my wife’s cheek, cleaning up that pearly cream. “You’re the mayor.”

I rose. I would be more than the mayor. I could change things. Two towns a day. I could spread paradise around the world. Slowly. I could change people. Make the world better faster than I could before. I would do what I could to end suffering.

To make a world without pain and anguish.

My wife grabbed my cock. She stroked me. She pumped her hand up and down my cock. Her touch felt incredible. I groaned, setting my phone down on the desk. I grabbed my wife’s hips and enjoyed her pumping hand sliding up and down that shaft. Pleasure surged through my body. My balls tightened.

Linda smiled at me. She looked so beautiful dripping in my cum. Radiant and alive. A woman reveling in the passion of her man. She pressed my cock’s tip into the silky caress of her bush. She pressed it into her pussy folds. This wonderful bliss surged through me.

I groaned at the feel of her hot flesh.

“Mr. Mayor!” she groaned as I thrust into her pussy.

My wife’s passion engulfed me. Her pussy surrounded me. The amazing, delicious, and wondrous embrace of her silky flesh. Her twat squeezed around me as she leaned back into Imogene’s embrace. My wife’s face twisted with pleasure while my young secretary licked up more of my cum from Linda’s cheek.

My cock pumped in and out of her twat. I buried into her again and again. I rammed into her pussy’s depths. I savored the feel of her wrapped around me. Pleasure surged through me as I enjoyed my wife.

My victory.

“Yes, yes, fuck me, Mr. Mayor!” she moaned. “Ooh, you’re going to be so powerful. The things you’ll do in this office.” My wife grinned at me while her pussy squeezed around me. “It’ll be amazing!”

“Yes!” I growled. “I’ll change the world!”

“Oh, we will!” she moaned, her thighs locking around my waist. Her pussy squeezed and massaged me.

Imogene’s pink tongue licked up and down my wife’s face. Linda turned her head and kissed the secretary. Their tongues dueled, passing my jizz back and forth. The pearly cum swirled around their pink tongues. My dick throbbed, the ache swelling and swelling in me. I groaned, thrusting hard and fast into my wife.

My balls swung into her flesh as I reveled at the sight of my wife’s face contorting in bliss. Her hips wiggled from side to side as I plowed into her. She groaned, her tits heaving between us. Linda broke the kiss, her eyes burning with passion.

“Yes, yes, yes, fuck me, Mr. Mayor!” she moaned. “Ooh, yes, yes! Ram that cock into me. I was so wet when you gave your speech. It was such a turn on.”

“You are so powerful, Mr. Mayor,” groaned Imogene.

“You are, Mr. Mayor,” a redheaded girl with blue eyes said. She had round breasts and a feisty look in her eyes. “Eh, Rei?”

“Indeed, Asuka,” the blue-haired girl with the red eyes said, her voice a soft whisper. “It is an honor to serve you, Mr. Mayor.”

“Yes!” my wife moaned.

I thrust harder into Linda. I fucked with passion. My cock rammed into her juicy pussy. She licked her lips, gasping, moaning, whimpering in delight. Her passion echoed through the room. My groans joined hers.

It was so incredible to be in her. I’d almost lost everything. Linda would have gone back to being miserable and repressed. My daughters would have been too scared to admit their love for me. James would be lost in his fantasy world, dreaming about Ruri and Orihime instead of loving them directly.

“Oh, fuck, yes!” I gasped, burying hard into my wife’s pussy. “We’re going to make everything better.”

“Steve!” she moaned, her pussy so juicy. “Yes!”

Her large breasts jiggled in Imogene’s grasp. The naughty secretary lapped at my wife’s left cheek now, licking up my cum with hunger. Her hands slid up to squeeze my wife’s nipples. She pinched them. Linda’s cunt tightened on my dick.

The pressure built and built at the tip of my cock. I reveled in this moment. In this wild threesome. My hips thrust forward hard and fast. I rammed into my wife hard. My balls tightened as the pressure swelled in them.

I was getting so close to erupting. To exploding in my wife’s cunt. My balls smacked into her flesh. Her pussy gripped me. Massaged me. Her eyes stared into mine, bursting with her emerald passion. She whimpered.

“Steve!” she moaned. “Oh, god, I love you!”

Her pussy convulsed around me. My wife’s twat spasmed around my cock. I buried into her hard and fast. I slammed into her depths. This amazing rush shot through me. This wonderful bliss that brought me closer and closer to exploding in her.

My heart raced in my chest.

I buried over and over into her massaging pussy. Her flesh rippled around my thrusting cock. My balls filled with cum. The pressure at the tip of my dick reached a boiling point. I couldn’t stop. I had to erupt in her.

“Linda!” I groaned. “God, I love you! I’m so glad I have you!”

She cupped my face and leaned forward, pulling away from Imogene’s licking mouth. She kissed me hard as I rammed into her pussy. I didn’t mind the salty taste on her lips because I was riding so high from the orgasmic rapture shooting through me.

My cum exploded out of me.

My jizz fired over and over into her pussy. This amazing blast of pleasure slammed through my body. Into my mind. I soared on the high, celebrating my victory with the woman I loved. My tongue danced with hers. I held her tight as the pleasure surged to the peak in me. My cum pumped over and over into her amazing depths.

I loved this woman. I was so glad I had her. Had my family. Her arms held me tight as our tongues dueled. Her pussy milked out every drop of cum in my balls. I spurted the final blast as the pleasure peaked in me.

Ideas burst in my mind.

I would change our town.

Linda broke the kiss. She shuddered, her eyes still glossy with her passion. “There is something different about you.”

“I upgraded my powers,” I whispered to her. “I need to think about how to do this, but I can edit the entire town. I can edit you again. There are so many new ways we can do this.”

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Linda Davies

I shuddered at those words. My husband sank down in the chair and leaned back in it. He held his phone in his hand. He was thinking, pondering his options. He was looking through the different possibilities. Anael would be around him right now, that invisible angel whispering for him to do such naughty things.

It made my pussy so wet. I dripped with his cum and felt so wonderfully juicy. I groaned and shuddered. I trembled on the desk, my heart racing with delight. He could edit the entire town. What could he do? I wanted to think, to help him, but I was just so horny.

“Imogene, lick me clean,” I moaned. I needed more orgasms.

I watched my husband think as Imogene slid around the table. The girl was so bright. I couldn’t remember the original her, but I knew there was something about her that I didn’t like. Something that I asked Steve to edit in her. I wished I could remember the old timelines, but I changed when Steve edited things.

I just never felt different. I felt the same person as always. Only he knew.

I wanted to help him more. To make Rainier perfect. I would be the best wife. I would give him ideas. We would make things amazing. An entire town. The ideas rippled through my mind as my pussy itched.

“Mmm, Mrs. Davies,” moaned Imogene as she sat on Steve’s knees, leaning forward to eat me. He hardly noticed, lost in thought. “Let me get you all cleaned up.”

“Yes,” I moaned.

She pressed her face into my pussy. Her lips nuzzled through my auburn bush. Her brown eyes stared up at me. I shuddered as she took her first lick, gathering up the cum flooding out of me. My husband’s seed. She was so eager to eat it. She had such a look of joy on her face as she flicked her tongue through my folds.

I gasped at her hungry licks. Her tongue scooped the cum out of me. I shuddered, my hips humping against her face grabbed her brown hair. I groaned at the delight rippling through my body. This wondrous heat surged through me. Her tongue felt amazing. Delicious. She lapped at me.

Feasted on me.

“Oh, Imogene,” I moaned, trying not to be too loud so my husband could think. He looked so handsome with his brow furrowed. “Lick up all that cum.”

“You taste so good, Mrs. Davies,” the sweet thing said. I was glad we kept her. We had all those wonderful servants James created. They were all so darling, and all of them were so loving, so eager to please the family with their bodies. But it was nice having a real woman, too.

Her tongue lapped through my folds with hunger. She licked and fluttered them. They made me shudder. I trembled, my breasts heaving as Imogene teased me. My head tossed back and forth. This wonderful delight surged through my body. My toes curled. My heart raced.

“Oh, yes,” I groaned. “Ooh, that’s nice. That’s good. Yes, yes, lick me just like that.”

Her tongue darted through my folds. She feasted on me with such hunger. She devoured me with passion. Her tongue fluttered up and down my slit. She teased me with every stroke. Her tongue made me shudder. My eyes widened as the pleasured surged through my body.

She licked out all the cum. She lapped it out of my snatch’s depths. I bit my lips as she gripped my thighs. Her tongue wiggled deeper and deeper into my twat. She scooped out my husband’s jizz, her eyes staring up at me.

I leaned back on my elbows, my breasts jiggling. “Rei! Asuka! Come suck on my nipples.”

“Yes, my Lady,” Rei said in her soft voice.

“You got it!” Asuka said, her voice bright and enthusiastic. I think they came from the same show. They were the first new girls James had created after my son had made his girlfriends. James was having a lot of fun with that naughty pen his father edited for him.

The blue-haired Rei and the fiery-haired Asuka sauntered to me. Asuka’s breasts were larger, rounder. They had a plumpness. Rei’s breasts were small mounds, her body slender, her hips almost boyish, her pussy lips hairless and tight. She had an innate grace to her that contrasted with Asuka’s feisty steps.

They reached me, leaned over the desk, and engulfed my nipples. I gasped, loving the pressure of their sucking. They were such wonderful girls. So loving. Asuka sucked as much of my fat nub and areola into her mouth as she could while Rei nursed with gentle passion. Both sent delight rushing down to my pussy.

I squirmed on the table, moaning, gasping, my mind reeling. My husband could change so much.

Imogene’s tongue fluttered through my folds, going up and down.. I think she had found all of my husband’s seed because she was licking me differently. She nibbled on my pussy lips. She made me feel incredible.

My pussy clenched as her tongue found my clit. She circled it, teasing it while Asuka sucked with hunger on my right nipple. Rei nibbled on the left, her red eyes staring at me. I groaned, squirming on the desk.

“Oh, you three are spoiling me,” I moaned.

“It is our pleasure, my Lady,” whispered Rei between nibbles.

Asuka sucked harder.

“Mmm, you taste so good,” moaned Imogene. “My girlfriend has to try your pussy. She’d love it.”

“I bet she would!” I gasped.

Her fingers jammed into my pussy. I groaned, squeezing my eyes shut. So much pleasure rippled through me I gasped out my delight. I humped against Imogene’s sucking mouth latched on my clit. I squeezed my thighs around her head.

My fingers curled and relaxed as the bliss built and built in me. Rei and Asuka’s teasing suckles made me feel incredible. The two lovely girls gave me such bliss. I moaned, my heart racing as they pleased me. Their tongues circled around me, bringing me closer and closer to exploding.

Imogene’s thrust a third digit into my pussy. I gasped at the wonderful delight flowing through me. I groaned, my head tossing back and forth as the pleasure built and built in my depths. That wonderful bliss surged through me. It was incredible. My eyes squeezed shut.

“Imogene!” I moaned. “Rei! Sweet Asuka!”

I exploded.

My pussy convulsed around Imogene’s fingers. Her mouth abandoned my clit to lap up my juices gushing out of my depths. Her three digits filled my pussy. My cunt spasmed around them, drinking in their wild plunges. She pumped them in and out of me. My eyes fluttered. The heat rippled around me. I humped my hips as I shook.

Stars burst before my eyes. I groaned and gasped as such rapture surged through me. My pussy spasmed harder. Rei and Asuka sucked on my nipples, intensifying my bliss. The ecstasy surged through my mind. It drowned me.

“I have a great idea on how to edit you,” I heard Steve say.

“What?” I gasped, my orgasm burning through my thoughts. I bucked and buzzed in rapture. My body trembled and—

—my orgasm surged to the peak of my bliss. We had won. We had defeated Seth. A momentary flash of confusion washed through me at the two girls sucking on my breasts. They were Rei and Asuka. I knew them and yet were strangers to me.

I had two sets of memories. I groaned, my mind reeling from the pleasure. Imogene’s fingers pumped through my cunt as I struggled to figure out what was happening. I was cumming. Gasping. Pleasure writhed through me.

Why did I have two sets of memories?

I remembered the mounting tension of the week as Steve and I dealt with the threat of Seth Meyer, making our plans, editing things to be ready for this day. I remembered celebrating his inauguration and then the attack had come. The strange girls fired at City Hall so we fled into the basement room where we’d been trapped.

At the same time, I remembered the last week of joy, getting ready for the inauguration, no fear, no idea that there even was an enemy. Those strange girls who attacked us instead were our servants. I groaned as I pressed Rei and Asuka from my tits.

“Steve?” I panted, sitting up. “Steve, what is…?”

There were two figures around him One was a blonde, slender girl with purple eyes and the other was a black-haired and busty woman with topaz eyes. I didn’t remember them from the nearly hundred girls James had created the last few weeks.

“She sees us, my Lord,” said the topaz-eyed woman.

“Yes, she does,” the slender one said. She sauntered to me. “But can she feel us?”

I gasped as her hand went right through me. It was such a strange thing. It just phased through me like she didn’t exist. Rei and Asuka stared at me weirdly. Imogene lifted her head from between my thighs, mouth stained with pussy juices and cum.

“Mrs. Davies?” she asked. “Are you okay? You look shocked.”

“I’m fine,” I said, the blood drained from my face.

“Imogene, if you would give my wife and myself some privacy,” Steve said.

“Oh, of course,” the secretary said. “I have work to do anyway. I need to finalize your schedule for next week. Everyone wants to meet with you.”

“Thank you,” he said.

She stood and sauntered to where her clothes were folded carefully by the door. I shook my head, the dual memories warring in my mind for which one were the true ones. The ones that were full of danger, of Seth Meyers, felt more ephemeral, less real than the others. My eyes flicked back to the petite woman, she had such a big grin on her face.

“I’m Anael,” she said. “Ooh, it’s so interesting. Steve edited you so you could remember Seth and all the problems he caused before your husband defeated him and unlocked my powers.”

“I see,” I said. Anael… “You’re the angel. And who are you?”

“Jophiel,” the busty one said. She had a calm demeanor. “I was Seth Meyer’s patron, but your husband edited me away. Now I serve and love him, my Lady.”

“I see…” I said. I trembled. I could remember the fear of being trapped in that room. “You beat Seth?”

“I beat him,” Steve said. “I wanted you to remember. I wanted you to know all about it. I can edit people a second time. And I have twelve edits a day now. I can edit the entire city at once. I can modify it in so many ways. Linda, we’re going to change everything.”

I trembled. “We’re going to make our kingdom.” I sank onto his lap. I felt so energized. “We’re going to make paradise, aren’t we?”

“Yes, we are,” he said, such a huge grin gracing his face. “Tomorrow, we’re editing Rainier and that’s just the start. We’re going to change the world, Linda.”

“You are,” I said. And I would be at his side. I was so eager for this. It would be amazing. I trembled and kissed my husband hard on the lips.

I couldn’t wait for what we would do.

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The game has changed dramatically, Most High. The Council is… perturbed by these events. Angels being edited…

Was always a possibility. Free will was given to our two mortals.

Yes, but Anael came very close to breaking the rules. She all but baited her mortal into guessing her name. And now that he has changed her loyalties and those of Jophiel…

It is a troubling edit. This game has mutated beyond the original parameters. Desperation drove this move. When one is given free will, things can never be predicted.

I understand that was the point, but… What will he do with them next? He has accumulated power, Most High.

You believe he needs a counter? Something to balance him? You fear what he will do to the world.

Don’t you, Most High? How many mortals will he rewrite? And with Anael and Jophiel’s knowledge, how many angels can he win to his cause?

You fear he will gain more edits?

There are many lesser angels concerned. Anael and Jophiel know their true names. Out of trust, they had shared them. Anael and Jophiel would never have betrayed them before, but they are no longer loyal to you, Most High.

Unleash Sandalphon. That should motivate the game to proceed in the best manner. Sandalphon is free to observe and make ready if intervention is necessary. So long as the mortal does not make any further gains of power then he can proceed unmolested. He has come close to breaking the rules. He has bent them, but that is allowed.

It will be done, Most High.

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