Editing Reality Book Three, Chapter Eight: Testing the Changes

 

Editing Reality

Book Three: Naughty Fantasies Unleashed

Chapter Eight: Testing the Changes

by mypenname3000

© Copyright 2019


Story Codes: Male/Female, Female/Teen females, Male/Females, Incest, Mind Control, Oral Sex, Hot Wife, Cuckold, Lactation, Breeding

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Steve Davies

The menu for Rainier, Washington opened.

  • City of Rainier, King County, State of Washington, The United States of America
    • Population
    • Physical Quality
    • Spiritual Quality

I trembled. My angels moved around me. My gaze flicked across the room to my family. The jizz leaking out of my eldest daughter froze as it trickled towards the table. She was paused, trembling in pleasure, my wife and my other daughter still sucking on her nipples. Beyond, my concubines and my secretary were locked in a daisy chain. A tremble raced through me.

I was editing a town. Not just a person or a room. If I messed this up, it would be a catastrophe. It would affect thousands of people. My heart thundered in my chest. My hand shook. I swallowed, my breath quickening.

“You and your family have thought this threw,” Jophiel said. She touched my wrist. I glanced at the busty angel, her topaz eyes bright. “I am here to guide you. To aid you. Unlike some angels, I won’t just suck your cock.”

“But that’s fun,” said Anael. My petite angel moved before me. “You got this, Master.”

She fell to her knees before me and sucked my pussy-soaked dick into her mouth. I groaned, shaking my head at her naughty gesture. Her purple eyes gleamed as her lips sealed about it. her cheeks hollowed. She bobbed up and down my shaft, sucking and loving me.

“Let’s start with the hard stuff,” I said. How do I go about editing in nuclear reactors into Rainier? It would be under the Physical Quality Menu.

  • Physical Quality
    • Building Codes
    • Transportation
    • Infrastructure
    • Property
    • Environment
    • Location

I stared at my options. I wasn’t as familiar with editing cities as I was people. I hit the Infrastructure Sub-Menu.

  • Infrastructure
    • Electrical
    • Sewage
    • Communication
    • Water
    • Waste

Then Electrical Sub-Menu. I hesitated now, my dick throbbing in my Anael’s mouth. I licked my lips and glanced at Jophiel. Anael bobbed her head, working her lips up and down my cock as Jophiel leaned in to me.

“I shall guide you,” she said. “Anael, please refrain from being too distracting with your blowjob.”
I smiled and followed her instructions. It was not simple. I had to put in a lot of information for the nuclear reactors, finding the locations, designing the buildings, inserting the reactors. There was a lot of short-cutting, like the app knew what I meant and often took care of the small details.

“Write down that the building is constructed to current codes for King County, State of Washington, and the United States of America,” Jophiel said at one point. “It will then create the building with all the appropriate safety features, proper materials, and all the electrical.”

I typed that out.

I edited that they were about to go online, that they were hiring and that the most qualified individuals in the area would apply for them. I placed seven throughout the town. I had to edit property to be bought by the town via eminent domain. I had to change that this was an initiate launched years and years ago and only now reaching completion. I edited in that there were no challenges to their construction.

All through it, my angel sucked on my cock. She nursed on it, bobbing her head. My balls twitched. This was so surreal. She didn’t try to make me cum, just kept me hard and maintained the pleasure buzzing through me. Almost like a baby sucking on a pacifier. It was like it relaxed her.

“That’s everything for that,” Jophiel said. I don’t know how long it took. It felt like hours. I didn’t feel tired or anything. Things were paused. Maybe my body would stay strong the entire time.

“Let’s switch over to the Golden Rule implementation,” I said.

Anael sucked harder.

I groaned, my dick twitching as I switched to the Spiritual Quality Menu.

  • Spiritual Quality
    • History
    • Government
    • Sexuality-Female
    • Sexuality-Male
    • Faith
    • Morality
    • Aura

I clicked on the Morality Sub-Menu.

  • Morality
    • Legality
    • Outlook

And then the Outlook Sub-Menu. There, I added:

  • “Everyone who enters the city limits of Rainier, Washington will want to do unto others as they would have them do unto them. They want to help. To be friendly.
  • People who live in Rainier, Washington takes pride in their town. They want it to be the best place to live for everyone. They hold no prejudices against others.

It was simple stuff. Nothing major. Writing hundreds of laws to try and control everyone and make them into more robots than people would be exhausting. We would forever be trying to close loopholes. Put a man in a cell, he’d try to escape. This way, people would just want to be decent to each other.

I went to the next time. I backed up to the Sexuality-Female Sub-Menu.

  • Sexuality-Female
  • Orientation
  • Desires
  • Libido
  • Taboos

I wanted to edit the town so my family can have the fun they want. It was selfish, but we were making things better, so didn’t we deserve to enjoy ourselves? I could do so much worst things with this app. I had the power, granted to me by the Most High.

So I hit the Taboos Sub-Menu. There were plenty of them. All the taboos that society as a whole agreed on. The things that the people of Rainier, on the majority, agreed upon. People were always as individuals had these to varying strength, but I could affect them all. I could strengthen them and impose them on every person.

Or I could remove them from every person.

One taboo caught my eye:

  • Having sex with strangers is wrong.

I edited it.

  • Having sex with a stranger is wrong unless that person is Steve Davies, Linda Davies, Becky Davies, James Davies, or Sam Davies.

Next, I found another taboo that I deleted outright, removing the societal belief that having consensual sex with family members was wrong. Then I changed the age of consent down to fourteen. I didn’t feel comfortable going lower than that.

A wicked thrill rippled through me once I finished typing that, my cock throbbing in Anael’s mouth.

I switched from the Taboo Sub-Menu to the Desires Sub-Menu.

  • Every woman has a latent desire to have sex with Sam Davies, Linda Davies, Becky Davies, James Davies, and Sam Davies. This desire only swells when one of the named individuals shows interest in them, otherwise, it is a subconscious desire not noticed by the individual.

Next, I went to the Libido Sub-Menu. Here, it was a general slider on the average sex drive of women in Rainier. I raised it. Not much, but just enough to let women have a bit more fun in the town. Jophiel giggled.

“Anael has really corrupted you, hasn’t she, Master?” she asked.

I winked at her while Anael swirled her tongue over my cock’s crown. I groaned as a surge of pleasure shot through me.

I then backed out of the Sexuality-Female Sub-Menu to the Sexuality-Male Sub-Menu. I tweaked their Libido Slider, and on their Taboo Sub-Menu, I deleted the taboo against incest and lowered the acceptable age of consent. Under their Desire Sub-Menu, I added:

  • Everyone has a latent desire for their female partners to have sex with Steve Davies, Linda Davies, Becky Davies, James Davies, and Sam Davies. This desire only swells when one of the named individuals shows interest in their female partner, otherwise, it is a subconscious desire not noticed by the individual.

Next, I went to the Morality Sub-Menu and clicked on the Outlook Sub-Menu.

  • It is not cheating if an individual has sex with Steve Davies, Linda Davies, Becky Davies, James Davies, or Sam Davies. No one thinks it is wrong for themselves or others to have sex with those named individuals.
  • Any children born from these affairs will be loved by the woman and her partner and treated as their own.

Then I switched to the Faith Sub-Menu.

  • Faith
    • Zeal
    • Belief

I went to the Belief Sub-Menu and added:

  • It does not violate any religious belief if an individual has sex with Steve Davies, Linda Davies, Becky Davies, James Davies, or Sam Davies. No member of any religion will believe it is wrong for themselves or others to have sex with those named individuals. It is not a sin.

“That’s going to make my wife and daughters happy,” I said, smiling. I knew they would have fun with all the women they could. I would, too, but I wanted my family happy. James really had his own way to have his fun thanks to my edits, but this would let him expand it if he wanted.

Or maybe he would just be happy with his two girlfriends. Either way, it was just to give him the option.

I then shifted to the Aura Sub-Menu to add the next item I wanted. I was glad I had Jophiel to remind me what to do next. It was hard to remember with one naughty angel sucking on my cock. My balls tightened from her sucking, the pressure building at the tip.

  • A calming presence suffuses Rainier. When people get angry, this calming presence allows people who are angry to have a chance to think through their actions before making a serious mistake.
  • People who enter Rainier, Washington gain the belief that Steve Davies, or whomever he nominates, should be in charge of the city they live in, the state they live in, and the country they live in.
  • Steve Davies, Linda Davies, Becky Davies, James Davies, and Sam Davies are unaffected by any of the changes caused by this edit and remember the original timeline.

That was the idea I had. If I wanted to extend things so I can make the entire country better, I needed to do it the right way. I couldn’t just edit the entire country to make myself the leader, but if people voted for me into office, then there would be no problem. That was why I had to edit all the major cities and capitals. Places where millions of people lived and millions more pass through from surrounding communities.

I switched over to Government Type Sub-Menu. Currently, it was a Representative Republic for the town with an elected City Council for the legislative branch, a City Court for the Judicial Branch, and a Mayor for the Executive Branch. I switched the executive branch from an elected representative to an elective monarchy that went into effect upon my election. The person still had to be voted in, but they would serve for life or until they resigned.

“Nicely done,” Jophiel said. She pressed against me, her breasts large and soft. Her nipples rubbed into my arm.

“Thanks,” I said, my dick throbbing in Anael’s mouth. I shuddered, realizing just the amount of changes I was making. This was incredible. I was taking a massive step here.

Was it right?

Probably not, but I could do it. And things would be better. My family would be safer. It wasn’t violating the rules that Sandalphon had placed on me when he appeared in this very office yesterday. I trembled, my heart racing. This was such a huge step.

I was setting myself up for real power. I had never wanted it, but now that it was within my grasp, I had to seize it. How long had I thought that politicians just messed things up? That they didn’t do the right thing? That they didn’t do things the way I wanted?

Now I had my chance to do things right.

I had my family to advise me. My angels. Well, Jophiel. Anael would just tell me to turn everyone into horny sex slaves. I glanced down at her, seeing her purple eyes gleaming as she worked her mouth up and down my dick.

She winked at me and sucked.

“Damn,” I groaned, my dick throbbing. She’d kept the pressure up for a while, but now she was bringing me towards an orgasm.

Her tongue darted around my dick. The pleasure surged down my shaft. My balls tightened. My cock twitched and throbbed. Her hot, wet mouth felt incredible. Now that I had made the changes, now that I had modified my town, I could enjoy myself.

I shuddered and groaned, my dick throbbed and ached. The pleasure swelled and swelled. Anael moaned, humming around my cock. She teased me with that hot, wet mouth. My angel knew how to please me. To love me.

“Mmm, let yourself go,” purred my angel Jophiel. She rubbed against me. “Just explode into her mouth. She craves it.”

“She’s just a wanton angel, isn’t she?” I groaned.

“Oh, yes,” Jophiel moaned. “She does such naughty things while we watch you. Fingering my asshole. Rubbing her pussy on my nipples. She is a kinky angel.”

“You should spank her for being naughty,” I groaned.

Anael sucked hard.

“Fuck!” My cock erupted. My jizz fired into her mouth. I pumped load after load into my angel.

The pleasure slammed through me. Stars exploded across my vision. Waves of darkness over me. I groaned as I came over and over. Each blast sent rapture slamming into my mind. She gulped down my jizz. She swallowed it.

Her hand massaged my balls. She worked out the spunk. I groaned as she nursed out all my jizz. My chest heaved as the pleasure spilled through me. Buzzing, riding that orgasmic high, I hit the COMPILE button.

YES

or

NO

The ripple that flowed from me was the largest yet. The warping to reality distorted everything. I felt it rippling around me. I groaned, swaying. Jophiel held me against the melding of reality. I blinked, looking around.

Nothing had shifted in here. My family was all in the same places. That was a good sign that I hadn’t fucked anything up. I shook my head, my heart hammering in my chest from the bliss. I’d done it.

I had fixed my town.

I closed the app.

Anael and Jophiel vanished. My softening cock, no longer held in my naughty angel’s mouth, bobbed before me, gleaming with her spit. I panted, chest rising and falling. I ran a hand through my hair, looking around the room.

“Dad!” gasped Becky. “You teleported!”

“Did I?” I asked, looking around. “I guess I moved a bit since I started editing. I made you immune to the changes so…”

“It’s done?” Linda asked, raising her head from our daughter’s breast. She licked her lips, her eyes blinking.

“It’s done,” I told her. Hopefully.

At the far end of the table, the three concubines—Tammy, Rita, and Courtney—moaned with Imogene. Their daisy chain looked to be at its peak, all of them gasping and panting through their orgasms.

“Mmm, Daddy, you rock!” Sam said and threw herself down the table and hugged me, her small breasts pressing into my side.

I grinned at her.

We wrapped things up and left the office, all the girls getting dressed before living, none of them acting like it was strange. We found James with his two girlfriends. Ruri was flushed and clearly just bred thanks to Sam’s kiss and my son’s seed. She squeaked in fright when we opened the office door and found her on the desk. She covered her breasts.

“Dad!” James gasped, struggling to cover his junk.

Orihime laughed.

I just grinned. “Get dressed, we’re leaving.” I paused. “And congratulations.”

“You’re welcome,” Sam said, a teasing grin on her face. Her short, red hair swayed about her cute face as she darted down the hall.

Once we were all dressed, we headed downstairs and left city hall. We piled into the minivan and headed home. This nervous writhe rippled through me as we pulled out into traffic. I looked around, struggling to see any changes.

Traffic flowed smoothly. No one tailgated me for doing the speed limit, but did that happen all the time? I looked around, glancing at the people walking down the sidewalk. People seemed to be nodding to each other, smiling, even pausing to talk.

Was that how it always was?

I struggled to remember. Seattle and the surrounding areas weren’t known to be the friendliest places. The Seattle Freeze, as it was nicknamed, was the habit of most people to not really talk to strangers. To just go about your day and ignore each other. But people were stopping, talking, some were hugging.

Then I spotted a group of women giving food to a pair of homeless men lurking in an alley. They were talking animated, the men standing up, nodding their heads. The two women were young, pretty and well-dressed, not the sort you’d think would be comfortable approaching a pair of ragged men.

It gave me hope that things were changing. That I had actually made a difference. It felt like a community was growing around us. Rainier was changing from a collection of strangers to people who would want to help each other.

“Oh, wow,” Becky gasped, leaning in. “You replaced the McDonalds with one of my plants.”

I nodded. “It was the best spot for it.” I glanced at the building. It didn’t look that scary, just a small office building though one with a collection of signs warning of certain dangers. There was also a “Now Hiring” sign out front.

“You really did it,” Becky said.

“In a few days, they should be online,” I said. “As far as everyone else is concerned, it’s been a project nearly a decade long goal that the town has been working towards.”

“Wow,” Sam said, shaking her head. “That’s so weird. There’s really a nuclear reactor in there?”

“It’s safe,” Becky said. “Daddy wouldn’t make that mistake.”

I swallowed. I’d made a few. “I think so. It’s built to code and with the best materials possible.”

“This is cool,” said James. “Like when I create something with my drawings. Though I’m not sure I could have built a working nuclear reactor. I guess I’d have to understand them a bit better.”

I just grinned, satisfied with myself.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Linda Davies

James and Sam were right. Would my way have produced this subtle change to the town? People just seemed friendlier. Kinder. People weren’t scurrying past the homeless like they were disgusting things, pieces of trash, but were stopping and trying to help them.

It was amazing.

Steve stopped at a light. I glanced to my right to see a woman with short, black hair. She was young, pushing a stroller. A man walked beside her, clean-cut and handsome. A wedding ring flashed on her hand. She was wearing tight, gray yoga pants and a black sports bra, her breasts round. She looked gorgeous.

I wondered…

I rolled down the window. “Hi,” I called. “Hello, how are you?”

The woman glanced at me and smiled. “Oh, hi.” Something shifted in her eyes as she stared at me, the glimmer of desire kindling in them. My husband had done something to me. “Aren’t you the mayor’s wife?”

“I am,” I said. “Linda Davies.”

“Lauren Kelly,” she said.

Her husband just stood there. The man had a slight smile on his lips. It was almost… hopeful, like he had his own desires. Exactly what had my husband edited to the town to cause this? A wicked thrill rippled through me.

“How would you like to have sex with my husband, the mayor?” I asked.

The woman shuddered. “Oh, I’d love to. He’s such a sexy man.” She glanced at her husband. “Kurt?”

He nodded. “Of course, honey. You got to take the opportunity. It’s the mayor.”

My pussy clenched. He was willing to be cuckolded. Oh, my husband had definitely done something naughty. My hips wiggled from side to side. This heat surged through me. I whimpered, my breasts jiggling in my blouse.

This was so exciting.

“Well, hop in,” I told Lauren. “Kurt, we’ll see to your wife’s return when we’re done with her.”

She gave her husband a quick kiss on the lips then darted to the minivan. Sam, of course, threw open the side door. I glanced back to see this wicked gleam in Sam’s eyes. She licked her lips as Lauren reached us.

Sam pulled the new mother into the van and plopped her down on the back seat beside Becky. Sam sat down, both my daughters grinning at Lauren with this hungry look in their eyes. I shuddered, my thighs rubbing together.

This wicked heat surged through me. My clit throbbed and ached.

Then I groaned as both my daughters shoved up Lauren’s sports bra. Her round breasts popped out, her nipples pink and delicious. Sam cupped a breast and ducked down, latching on to the woman’s nipple. My daughter’s cheeks hollowed.

The woman moaned.

Sam squealed.

Her head popped up and she moaned, “She’s lactating like Tammy.” My daughter licked her lips. “Ooh, but she tastes a little more melony. It’s still delicious.”

“Oh, my,” groaned Lauren as Becky latched on. “Aren’t you two a pair of wicked girls. Mmm, this is hot.”

My husband grinned as the light changed. I patted his thigh and smiled at him. He was such an amazing man. I couldn’t wait for us to have more power. I just had to convince him to figure out Sandalphon’s real name, then we would be unstoppable.

Then I could delete that app.

Lauren moaned and shuddered as my daughters nursed at her tits. Sam and Becky suckled with hunger, the new mother shuddering, her moans echoing through the van. My pussy grew hotter and hotter as they teased her.

“Don’t drain her tits,” I said. “Save some for your father and me. We’re the ones playing with her.”

“Yeah, I think you both have homework to do,” said Steve.

Sam stiffened. Her mouth popped off the woman’s nipple. “Homework?”

“I know you haven’t done any of it, young lady,” Steve said, sounding so strong and firm. “And Becky, you can’t let your GPA slip.”

“But… but…” Sam spluttered. “You can just edit things so I excel.”

“I could,” he said. “But I’ve already edited you and can’t again, so you’re just going to have to buckle down all on your own.”

James laughed in the back.

“You and your girlfriends have homework, too,” Sam muttered, pouting.

Lauren giggled. “Your father’s strict. I hope my daughter turns out half as well-behaved as you.”

I smiled at that as Sam sighed. Then she leaned in and kissed Lauren. Was Sam giving her a fertile kiss? Not that she had to. Steve packed potent sperm. If I hadn’t had my tubal ligation, then Steve would have bred me before the kiss this morning.

I rubbed my belly. I was going to have another baby.

Lauren shuddered as she leaned back. Her tongue licked across her lips. She groaned and shuddered, her cheeks burning red. Her breasts jiggled as Becky pulled down her blouse, exposing her large tits.

“Oh, those breasts,” Lauren groaned and buried her face into Becky’s tits. She rubbed her face in them, her black hair caressing my daughter’s boobs.

I smiled at that. My daughters were enjoying their changes. We all were. I squeezed Steve thighs, so glad our lives had changed. They would only get better and better. I could make sure of that. I could use the app…

I pushed that down and just smiled at my husband.

We reached our home a minute later. The garage door opened. Some of the anime girls were waiting to greet us. A slender girl with red hair and a green-gold hue to her pale skin opened the passenger door to let me out. She smiled at me.

“Ce’Nedra, yes?” I asked as I stepped out.

She just smiled larger. “It is, Mistress. How was church?”

“Amazing,” I said.

“Okay, homework,” my husband said. “Samus, make sure they get it done.”

He spoke that to the blonde woman in the skin-tight, blue bodysuit that came with built-in heels. She looked strong and hot all at the same time. She nodded her head. Sam groaned, muttering something about her favorite character turning on her.

I pulled Lauren to me when she stepped out of the van, her exposed breasts jiggling. Milk beaded on one nipple. She melted against my side, her dark eyes gleaming with desire. My pussy dripped juices down my thighs. I was so eager for this fun.

She kissed me, hot and hungry. I shuddered, feeling her hard nipples through my blouse. My husband grinned from the woman’s other side. I broke the kiss and winked at him. I was so eager for this. I had been a while since we had a new woman in our bed.

Steve slipped his arms around both of us and we clung to him. He was such a handsome man, clean-shaven, dark hair, his eyes strong. I shuddered as Lauren claimed his mouth in a kiss. Their tongues dueled as we moved through the house, Samus berating Sam in the background. We stumbled upstairs and then we were in the master bedroom. I shuddered, feeling nostalgic.

“Mmm, stretch out on the bed,” I purred. “Let my husband set up the camera. We’re going to make a movie.”

“Oh, my,” Lauren said, her exposed breasts rising and falling. “I haven’t done that before.”

“Would your husband like to see it?” I asked, glancing at my husband. “We can send him a copy.” Steve and I had learned how to put our movies on DVDs years ago. I think it was called burning or something.

Lauren bit her lip. “Do you think he would?”

“Yeah,” said Steve as he opened the closet and pulled out the tripod.

I shuddered and unzipped my dress. It fell off my body, revealing my naked flesh. Lauren stared at me with hunger. She licked her lips and then took off her sports bra. She still wore her yoga pants. They molded to her.

Steve had the camera set up in a minute. He aimed it at the bed and said, “For me, this is the first one we’ve made.”

I blinked at that then giggled. I remembered all the times we made naughty videos, but he hadn’t lived that timeline. Or worldline, as Becky put it. “Hit play and then get naked. We’re going to devour Lauren.”

“Yes!” Lauren moaned, looking so flushed and eager for the fun to begin.

I shuddered, my face on fire. I licked my lips, glancing at my husband. He removed his dress shirt and slacks. Lauren whimpered in delight when his cock popped out, thrusting hard from his thick, dark bush. His balls swung heavy.

He was breeding the young wife. I hoped Steve remembered to make it so her husband wouldn’t object to raising my husband’s child. I shuddered. It was the ultimate cuckolding. My pussy clenched as I savored this naughty moment.

Naked, my husband and I sauntered to the bed. We went for her tits, sliding in from both sides. I swept my auburn hair to my right side so my face could be seen by the camera—something I’d learned from years of making amateur porn—and latched my lips on her pink nipple.

“Oh, Linda, yes!” she gasped as I suckled.

Rich, warm, creamy breast milk fired into my mouth. I savored the delicious taste. It had that sweet delight mixed with that cantaloupe flavor. It had a subtle difference from Tammy’s breast milk. I savored it, the delight melting on my tongue and making me shudder.

I suckled with hunger on her nipple. Steve joined me at her right breast, nursing on it and squeezing her boob. Lauren moaned and shuddered. Her hand shot down, burying into her yoga pants. She rubbed herself.

“Oh, Mr. Mayor,” she gasped. “This is so hot. Mmm, I can’t believe I’m in your bed. This is wild.”

Steve popped his mouth off her nipple and glanced down at her hand. “Yes, it is. Like being with us is a desire you never knew you had.”

“Yes!” the woman moaned.

Steve chuckled then he licked his lips. His eyes were locked on her hand working beneath her yoga pants. As I kept nursing, he slid down the bed and settled between her thighs. He hooked the waistband of her yoga pants and drew them down. She lifted her rump then gasped as he forced her legs up into the air. They pressed together as the stretchy material rolled up her thighs, her pink panties removed with them.

Her hand pressed into her black bush, her fingers rubbing at her twat. She pulled her fingers away as her now naked legs fell on either side of my husband. He tossed her yoga pants and panties away then leaned down and buried his face into her pubic hair, eating her married twat with hunger.

“Oh, Mr. Mayor, yes!” Lauren moaned. “Oh, yes, yes, your husband… Oh, my, he’s not afraid to eat cunt.”

I popped my mouth off. “Something we both have in common. You?”

Lauren licked her lips. “Never done it.”

I winked at her. “You won’t be able to say that after we’re done with you.”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Steve Davies

I devoured Lauren’s sweet pussy juices as she shuddered from my wife’s statement. Lauren moaned, “I won’t. I’ll lick your pussy out, Linda.”

Lauren then did something naughty. She rubbed her fingers, wet with her pussy juices, on her nipple, smearing her cream on them. My wife groaned and ducked her head back down. She latched on and sucked.

The married woman moaned. Her pussy clenched around my probing tongue. Her sweet juices soaked my mouth. I loved them. I reveled in her flavor while her silky pubic hair rubbed against my face.

This was so amazing. All my edits to the town seemed to have worked. I had the template to spread to other cities. My tongue danced through Lauren’s married depths, licking up her juices as she shuddered against me. Her bush rubbed on my mouth. Her sweet cream stained them.

“Oh, yes, yes,” she gasped. “Mr. Mayor! Oh, this is so hot.”

My hands grabbed her rump, squeezing her ass as I feasted on her. I licked and lapped, savoring the passion flowing out of her. My dick grew hard. I throbbed and ached, eager to bury into her. To fuck her hard.

My tongue lapped up to her clit. She gasped. I sucked and nibbled on it. Her hot cream soaked my chin. She tossed her head from side to side while the camera recorded it all. Her husband would get to see her being cuckolded.

Being bred.

My dick throbbed hard. I sucked with all my hunger on her bud. Her moans sang through the room. Her thighs tightened around my head. Linda played with both her tits, suckling on one boob with hunger.

“Oh, Christ,” gasped Lauren. “Oh, my god. That’s… that’s… Yes!”

Her juices gushed out onto me. She bucked, her rump clenching beneath my kneading fingers. I lapped up the hot cream flooding out of her. That sweet passion melted on my tongue. I savored it, my dick throbbing.

“Ooh, did you just cum?” Linda asked after popping her lips off the married woman’s nipple.

“Yes!” gasped Lauren. “Oh, my god, Mr. Mayor! Oh, yes, yes!”

“Mmm, and that means you’re ready to be fucked.” My wife glanced at me. “To be bred by my husband.”

“I am!” Lauren moaned. “Oh, Mr. Mayor, I need it. Fuck me! Please, please!”

“Even if he’ll knock you up?” purred my wife.

“I don’t care. I just want to be fucked by him!”

“You heard her,” Linda said as she moved, straddling the married woman. “Breed her and let’s send her home with a copy of the video.”

My dick throbbed. It was so wrong that it made me almost cum. I rose, my face dripping with precum. As Linda settled her weight on Lauren’s mouth, I pressed my dick into the married woman’s bush, her silky hairs caressing the tip of my dick.

I thrust into her depths. Lauren moaned into my wife’s pussy. I groaned at that silky, wet sheath engulfing my dick. The friction sent pleasure sweeping through me. Before me, Linda groaned, her large tits swaying, her auburn hair sweeping about her face.

Her arms slid around my neck as she experienced the married woman’s tongue. Linda pulled me down, pressing me into her tits. I hugged her torso as I fucked Lauren. My wife’s breasts rubbed on the side of my face. I groaned into those breasts as I savored the hot, tight cunt squeezing around me.

“Mr. Mayor!” Lauren squealed again and again into my wife’s twat. “Oh, Mr. Mayor, yes!”

“Mmm, fuck her!” my wife moaned. “Drive that cock into her and flood her with all that cum. Breed her!”

“Yes!” I snarled, thrusting away hard.

My balls smacked into Lauren’s taint. Her thighs locked around me while her pussy massaged my cock. Every plunge sent pleasure shooting down my shaft to my aching balls. The delight then rushed through me. I groaned into my wife’s breasts, rubbing my face back and forth.

Linda’s and Lauren’s moans mixed with mine. Linda squirmed, her breasts jiggling against my face as she ground on the married woman’s hungry mouth. Lauren groaned between licking and lapping at my wife’s twat. I could hear the passion in the married woman’s cunnilingus.

“Oh, wow, you really like my pussy,” moaned Linda.

“I never knew until now,” panted Lauren. “I had this desire for you, Linda! Oh, you taste so good!”

“She does!” I groaned as Lauren’s twat squeezed around my dick.

My balls tightened. I would breed another man’s wife. I couldn’t believe how far I’d come since gaining the app a few weeks ago. This heady rush shot through me. My dick plunged forward hard and fast. I buried into Lauren’s pussy again and again as she feasted on my wife.

I kissed at the pillowy flesh of my wife’s tits. I sucked and nibbled at the inner slopes. I loved the smell, the feel, the taste of her skin. That salty delight melted on my tongue mixed with a hint of her perfume.

I thrust my dick over and over into Lauren’s cunt, building towards that explosive climax. I grunted and groaned. I rammed into her again and again. The heady thrill shot through me. That building pressure mounted in my balls. I came closer and closer to erupting in her. To flooding her with all my jizz.

It would be incredible. I would spurt so much jizz into her cunt. I would bathe her married depths in my seed. I growled into my wife’s tits, my balls growing tighter and tighter. The pleasure came closer and closer to exploding out of me.

“Oh, yes, yes!” Linda moaned. “Lick right there, Lauren. Oh, my god, yes. I’m going to cream your face. I’m going to gush my juices out and flood your hungry mouth. Don’t stop licking. You’re incredible.”

“You taste so good!” Lauren groaned. “Oh, Mr. Mayor, your cock… I’m going to cum on your cock while licking your wife’s cunt.”

I ripped my face from Linda’s tits and snarled, “Good! Don’t hold back!”

“Cum!” Linda moaned and then kissed me.

She thrust her tongue into my mouth, hugging me tight. She moaned into my lips, making a throaty, orgasmic sound. My dick ached as I thrust it in and out of Lauren’s twat. The pressure rose as I knew my wife drowned the married woman in pussy cream.

“So good!” Lauren moaned. “You’re cumming! I made you cum!”

Her pussy squeezed down on my thrusting dick. Then it convulsed. It spasmed around me. That wonderful heaven massaged my cock. I shuddered, slamming to the hilt in her then drawing back through her writhing flesh.

“Oh, god, I’m cumming! I’m cumming on the mayor’s dick!”

Linda broke the kiss, her green eyes staring into mine. “Breed her, honey!”

“Yes!” I snarled and rammed into Lauren’s cunt.

My dick exploded. My jizz spurted out of me. Blast after powerful blast of my cum spurted again and again. It was amazing. This wonderful passion that surged over me. I groaned, dizzy from the pleasure slamming into my mind.

Lauren whimpered into my wife’s pussy. The married woman’s cunt milked my dick. She drained me, wringing out all the fecund cum. The dizzying heat surged through me. I panted, my balls tightening. My heart raced.

“Shit,” I groaned, dizzy from the pressure. “Oh, damn, that’s good.”

“It is!” Linda moaned, her eyes shining. “I love what you’ve done!”

I grinned at her. My alterations worked. This was amazing. I kissed my wife and savored this moment. The spasming in Lauren’s pussy died, but I knew we would have more fun. She would be heading home with such a wild video for her husband to watch.

My dick throbbed, aching to cum again at that thought.

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Linda Davies

Our daughters slept cuddled up together beside us. After we’d sent Lauren home to her husband via an Uber we ate dinner as a family. By then, our daughters had finished their homework and wanted to have some fun. We wore them out. Now they were sleeping the way only teenage girls could. They were lost to the world, looking so cute together.

I cuddled up to my husband, my finger tracing his chest.

“What are you thinking about?” he asked as my finger played with his chest hair.

“Sandalphon,” I said, my heart tightening.

“You heard him,” Steve said. “What we’re doing doesn’t go against the boundaries. We’re fine. You don’t have to worry about him.”

“What if we… researched his real name?”

I held my breath as I waited for his response.

Steve glanced at me. Even though the lights were out, I could see the expression on his face. Shock. “And risk the Most High getting mad at us.”

“If we have his most dangerous angel on our side…” My fingers slid lower. “Imagine the power that would give us. You. The upgrade to your phone. Could the Most High challenge you then?”

“Don’t we have enough?” he asked, staring at me.

“We can change the world,” I said. “Not just a city, but everything. Make this world perfect. No more suffering. No more poverty. People hunting each other. The Golden Rule shared to everyone.”

His brow furrowed.

“You’re a good man, Steve. It’s why I love you. I know that’s what you want. A world where humans don’t destroy each other. A place where sanity can rule again. How can we do that if you can only edit two cities a day? There are hundreds just in Washington. How many cities are there in the country? Thousands? Maybe tens of thousands?”

“We don’t have to edit every city,” Steve said. “I had my own idea about this. I started it today. I put an aura on Rainier. Anyone who enters the city limits will want to elect me the person in charge of their city, county, state, and country to be me or someone I nominate.”

I blinked at that. This hot thrill rippled through me. My pussy grew wet. “Really? They’ll vote for you as president on the next election.”

“As a write-in candidate.” He stroked my arm. “So I don’t have to edit every city.” He smiled. “Did you know that there is this principle, the Pareto principle, that applies in so many aspects of life. Big things attract more to them. Most of the stars in the universe are small and yet most of the mass is held in a few of the really big stars. They sucked up the most material, leaving little for the rest. It’s the 80/20 rule. 80% of the wealth is held by 20% of the people. Big cities attract resources which attract people which attract more resources. It feeds on itself until most of a countries population is concentrated in a few small places. Places I can edit.”

“Okay,” I said, frowning.

“It’s the same way with cities. The big cities grow more than little cities. There are certain cities in America that hold vast swaths of the population. New York, Chicago, and Los Angeles are the three biggest cities in America. Not only do millions of people live in them, even more travel in and out of them. I edit those three, and think of the influence I’ll gain. That’s two days of work. Do Washington D.C. and I have every major politician and lobbyist on my side. Edit Olympia and other state capitols, and I’ll have local influences. That’s a month of work.”

I shuddered, pressing my pussy against him.

“A month, and no need to involve Sandalphon. No need to do more.” He glanced at me. “International trade comes through these major cities. It’ll spread. Then we hit other large population centers. London. Paris. Tokyo. Berlin. Singapore. Others. It’ll be slow, but we’ll make those cities better and change the world. No need to increase my power. No need to risk the Most High taking this all away.”

I bit my lip. He was right. I should be satisfied with that. And yet… There was this itch in me. There was something more powerful than us—something that could take this all away from us on a whim, just like it was given to us—and that galled me. I’d heard enough from my husband to know that this was a game for the Most High.

What if the game grew too stale.

Lilith offered me a way to break the rules. If my husband wouldn’t edit Sandalphon, what if I could? If I could figure out his secret name, then it would be me who would give his powers to Steve. Give us the strength to go farther.

To break free from anyone telling us what to do.

“You’re amazing,” I said, snuggling tight, my insides squirming. This was the best thing for our family. I had to do this. But… I wanted him to understand. “What if we just found Sandalphon’s name just in case we need it.”

“Too risky,” he said. “We’ll be fine.” He smiled at me. “Trust me, Linda.”

“I do,” I said. That was the truth, I trusted my husband, but I didn’t trust the Most High. Not any longer. He wasn’t the God I thought he was. I didn’t want to give this up. I didn’t want to go back to being that repressed woman scared of her sexuality, who had to resort to cheating on this wonderful man because he couldn’t give me everything I craved through no fault of his own.

I hugged him fiercely. “I’m with you to the end, Steve.”

He kissed me. I closed my eyes. I would do anything for my family. I would protect them even against themselves. I would find Sandalphon’s real name and tell Steve. Give him one last chance to do it himself.

If not… I would gamble on Lilith and the diabolical app.

To be continued…

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6 thoughts on “Editing Reality Book Three, Chapter Eight: Testing the Changes

  1. just some dude

    …and the fisherman said, “my wife wants to be God.”

    and the magic fish said, “Go home, she is sitting in her filthy shack again.”

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  2. same guy as before

    now I’m wondering how many people there are in the world named “steve davies”, etc.

    (and you omitted his name from the list of named individuals, including ‘sam’ twice!)

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  3. PAEUL

    Every woman has a latent desire to have sex with Sam Davies, Linda Davies, Becky Davies, James Davies, and Sam Davies.

    I’m geusing the first Sam was meant to be Steve.

    Loved the story. For me it’s a little strange that Anael and Jophiel can’t see Lilith or sens her presence but oh well. And Lindas fall into temptation is really interesting and in my opinion just shows how much God (or the Most Hight in this) is just a fickle thing like no other. Like you never know if what is hapening in the wolrd, even if given free will, was just a part of his plan. (considering he ios all knowing etc, and should know every posible outcome to everithing)

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    1. mypenname3000 Post author

      Yeah, that’s my bad.

      What if they are on different frequencies? Angels and demons.

      I think your questions on god will find answers by the end.

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