Tales of the World’s First Futa’s Daughters
Futa’s First Naughty Awakening
Chapter One: Alyessa’s Hot MILF Delight
by mypenname3000
© Copyright 2018
Story Codes: Hermaphrodite/Female, Virgin, Hot Wife, Cheating, Oral Sex
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November 12nd, 2045 – Alyessa Howards
“We’re joined today with Alyessa Howards promoting her new book, Accepting Being Futa in a Post Becky World,” Adelia Tash said as I sat beside on the love seat.
I had a huge pit in my stomach as I put on what I hoped was a beaming smile. The stage lights were so hot. I was so aware of the cameras focusing on us that were streaming us across the world live. Anyone with internet access could be tuning in to watch one of the most viewed and download shows on the internet. Adelia always had the best guests, including my futa-mother, Becky Woodward.
“It’s about Alyessa’s struggle to come to terms being the only futa in her small town,” Adelia said. “Alyessa numbers among the first wave of futa-daughters born to President Woodward.” The host turned to me, a smile on her coffee-brown features. She was an elegant woman in a pale-pink dress, her lush legs crossed before her.
She had perfect teeth.
I had to speak. “Hi,” I said. “Thanks for having me.”
“So, what was it like?” Adelia said.
“I was scared,” I said, swallowing, my thoughts drifting back. “We were a small farming community. Everyone knew everyone else. We had one church. I hid what I was. I wanted to be normal, not wild like my futa-mother. It was going fine until a month after I turned eighteen…”
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August 16th, 2036
I tucked my futa-cock against my pussy, my flaccid shaft pressing into the shaved folds of my pussy. I might be the only person who shaved her pussy to make it easier to hide her futa-cock. Taping my dick between my thighs sucked when I had pubic hair.
I learned that years ago.
I’d been tucking myself for as long as I could remember. I just wanted to be normal, not a freak thanks to my horny futa-mother. Becky Woodward was all over the news. She’d just announced her candidacy for president. Everyone was talking about her.
Again.
I didn’t ask to have a clit-dick. If anyone in my town knew… My stomach roiled. I was going to college soon, where maybe it would be different, but here? Our small town in central Oregon, Jefferson, was a small farming community. There wasn’t that many people here. Everyone knew everyone else’s business.
My mom never told the truth. She respected that decision when I was young after she moved us back to my grandparent’s house from Portland.
I grabbed the costume tape, my round breasts swayed and jiggled as I pressed the first strip over my cock, pressing it tight against my pussy folds. It was this delicious treat to enjoy. I shuddered as a little tingle ran through my two sexes.
That was bad. If I grew aroused, it was painful being tucked. Usually, I could avoid it by not ogling other girls. By pretending I liked boys. That was a lie. I wanted girls. So badly. Beautiful, lush, lovely girls. Round breasts, cute smiles, bubbly butts, and juicy…
“No, no, no, Alyessa,” I told myself, my strawberry-blonde hair swaying about my face. I focused on my reflection in the mirror before me, my green eyes intent. A small blush spread on my cheeks, highlighting the freckles dusting my cheekbones.
I ripped off another piece of tape.
“You are not thinking about that right now,” I told myself, my voice echoing through the bathroom. My skin was still damp from my shower. I smelled fresh and delicious, the scent of coconut wreathing about me.
I pressed the piece of tape to my cock, holding it in place. I nodded my head, keeping my thoughts from anything naughty. My nipples weren’t even hard. Good sign. I took a deep breath and grabbed my panties. They weren’t cut for futas, not that you could find panties like that at our local clothing store, and pulled them on. They were sea-blue, a little bit of lace around the leg holes and the waistband. They were cute, feminine panties.
A girl’s panties.
I seated the panties, running my fingers around the waistband to adjust them. You couldn’t tell I had a cock at all. It was safely tucked between my thighs. I nodded, my breasts jiggling. I grabbed a matching bra and slipped it on, clasping it before me then twisting it around and pulling the cups over my tits and sleeping my arms through the straps.
Humming, I darted out of the bathroom to my bedroom and grabbed a pair of shorts, also not cut for futas. I slipped into the jean shorts, wiggling my hips back and forth as I drew them up my thighs. Then I snagged a tank top. I hummed as I sat down at my desk and brushed my strawberry-blonde hair until it had a lustrous shine to it. It fell with such a delicious bounce around my face.
I applied a dusting of makeup, some tangerine-flavored lip gloss, a light amount of eye shadow and a touch of rouge to my cheeks. Just a little enhancement to my features. I looked pretty in that girl-next-door sort of way.
A little flutter ran through me, my heart beating in excitement.
“Keep calm,” I said. “Nothing’s going to happen. Just stay calm.”
That tingle itched at the tip of my futa-dick and deep in my pussy. I felt just a tiny trickle of juices soaking my shaft. I took a deep breath, thinking about the current heartthrob, Markus Hemsworth, all my friends were gushing over. A handsome stud playing the new Iron Man.
That took care of my impending arousal.
I darted out of my bedroom, bare feet smacking on the old, hardwood floors of the house built at least a hundred years ago. Maybe longer. I hurtled down the stairs, my feet smacking loudly through the house.
“Where you off to, Alyessa?” my mom called from the living room. She was sitting before the TV, watching the daily stream of Adelia Tash’s talk show. She held a glass of iced tea in her hand, a slice of lemon stuck on the rim.
“Just going to Jasmine’s,” I said. “We’re going to hangout all day.”
“Oh, sure, have fun,” she said, her red hair swaying about her face. She had features similar to my own, but Mom’s face wasn’t as delicate as mine, a trace of my futa-mother. “Wear protection.”
“I’m not going to have sex with my friend, Mom!” I hissed.
“Sure, sure,” Mom said, a naughty tone to her voice. She was quite frank about her one time with my futa-mother, Becky. Mom was a coed attending Oregon State University up at Portland—I was about to attend there in two weeks—when she drove up to Seattle to seduce the world’s first futa at the start of her popularity. Not only had my mom screwed Becky, she got her pussy licked clean by a girl named Dona and then was fucked by this guy named Kurt.
Shame he didn’t impregnate my mother. Then I wouldn’t have a dick.
“Becky didn’t even know my name,” Mom had once told me like that was something to be proud of.
“Unless you want to make me a grandmother,” my mom added. “I bet you and Jasmine would have cute daughters.”
“You are such a freak, Mom!” I hissed, not wanting to think of Jasmine pregnant. Or any girl. “I like boys!”
“Riiiiiight,” Mom said, watching the TV. “Well, college will sort you out. I was awkward before all that, too. But then I discovered what I liked there.”
I rolled my eyes, pulled on my sandals, and darted out of the house into the summer heat. I hurried down the street, passing other houses. I spotted my civics teacher from last year, Ms. Evans, working in her flower garden. The Black woman was wearing a tight pair of white shorts that hugged her rump. She had a wide-brimmed, straw hat shielding her face. I shivered and kept walking. I didn’t want her to realize I was staring at her. My heart pounded in my chest as I just kept rushing down the street, my hands flexing and relaxing.
I had such a crush on her. She was just such a beautiful woman. She always wore these sleeveless blouses that set off her rich, coffee-brown skin. Her lips were lush. I had masturbated my girl-dick a few times thinking of such naughty thoughts about her.
I always felt so bad when I succumbed to my cock’s arousal. There were times I tried just masturbating my pussy, rubbing my pussy lips, but my dick would erupt either way. And it would make such a mess, the pearly futa-jizz going everywhere.
I rushed along, my dick stirring before Ms. Evans noticed me. My pussy felt even juicier, soaking my shaft. I was getting hard, things growing uncomfortable. I took deep breaths, thinking of boys. Of Carter, my high school’s quarterback. Every girl of my class panted after him, including Jasmine. She wanted to go to prom with him.
It didn’t happen.
Two houses down from Ms. Evans, I reached my friend Jasmine’s house. There was an old eighteen-wheeler, the type of manually driven trucks used to pull those big trailers before self-driving rigs had taken over. Jasmine’s dad was a trucker still. He just there to make sure things didn’t go wrong and to unload the merchandise at the destination.
“He plays a lot of games on his phone,” Jasmine had told me. “He hates it, but the money’s still good. He just misses driving himself.”
It was so weird thinking of people driving their cars. Old movies showed it, and it looked insane.
I opened the gate of the white picket fence and darted down it, passing the blossoming wisteria filling air with the sweet scent. The lawn looked a little overgrown. Her dad was out on one of his long trips, gone for a few weeks before coming back for a while and then hitting the road again.
I darted up the wooden stairs to the porch that wrapped around the house. Boards creaked beneath my feet. I rang the doorbell. A buzzer growled as I held down the small button then died the moment I released it.
I hummed to myself, waiting. I could just walk in, but I always felt weird doing it.
The door opened and Mrs. Minx stood there. She was a busty blonde, wearing a V neck t-shirt and a pair of red shorts. She smiled at me, holding a glass of iced tea, cubes clinking. Her golden hair fell about her face, her lips lush and plump. Her blue eyes flicked up and down me.
“Alyessa!” she said, a big grin on her face. “How are you doing? It’s wonderful to see you.”
“Hi, Mrs. Minx,” I said, breathing in her sweet perfume. The scent of roses wafted around. “Is Jasmine home?”
“Of course,” Mrs. Minx said, grinning at me. “She’s up in her room.”
I nodded my head as she swept by. I felt my friend’s mom studying me, making me shift. She was another beautiful woman. My cheeks warmed beneath her scrutiny. Why was she staring at me like that? Was there a stain on my top?
“Are you busy this afternoon?” she asked.
“I’m hanging out with Jasmine all day,” I said.
Mrs. Minx cocked her head. “Her father’s taking her to Eugene soon.”
I blinked. “Oh, I didn’t realize Mr. Minx was back.”
“Yeah, last night. But he’s just taking Jasmine to Eugene to buy her some clothes and hang out with her before college. Then he’s back on the road for another two weeks.”
“Jasmine didn’t mention that,” I said, my stomach sinking. “She said we were going to hangout all day.”
“That girl.” Mrs. Minx shook her head, blonde hair swaying about her shoulders. “She’d forget her head if it wasn’t attached to her body.”
I giggled. “Yes, she would.”
“I’m glad you two are going to college together, because I would be worried.” She clasped my shoulder. Her perfume swelled in my nose. “You’re a responsible girl.” Her eyes flicked up and down me. “I hear you are mowing lawns.”
“For Reverend North and his wife,” I said, flashes of Mrs. North bursting through my mind, her black hair falling down around that motherly face. “To make some money to buy schoolbooks and stuff.”
“Well, my lawn is getting a little wild,” she said. “Would you mind mowing it after Jasmine leaves? I have a c-note with your name on it.”
“C… note?” I asked, frowning.
“A hundred,” she said, giggling. “Guess you’re a little young for that slang. Honestly, I never understood why it was called that when I was your age.”
“Oh, sure,” I said. “But that’s too much.”
She slid her hand across my shoulder to cup my face. She stroked my cheek, sending heat through me. “Oh, no, it’s fine. You deserve a good reward.”
Footsteps thudded down the stairs as my cock swelled harder, fighting against my tape. My pussy grew wetter, more lubricating juices soaking my shaft. I didn’t need this right now. I let out a little whimper, my heart thundering in my chest.
“Hey!” Jasmine called. My best friend raced up in a pair of jeans and a belly shirt, her breasts bouncing, the fringe at the hem of her top swaying over her flat, tan belly. “You’re here! The new issue of Teen Vogue just hit! I got it downloaded on my tablet!”
“Okay,” I said, grinning at her. “I bet there’s a pic of Markus Hemsworth in it.”
“Mmm, he’s as cute as his father,” Mrs. Minx said. “I had such the hots for Thor when I was your age.”
“Ugh, gross, Mom,”Jasmine said, grabbing my hand. “Markus is too young for you.”
My friend led me away, her blonde hair sweeping about her shoulders, her hand gripping me tight. I was so glad to be away from Mrs. Minx. I was totally misunderstanding that touch. I was just a horny futa, like my mother. Mrs. Minx was married and straight.
It wasn’t like I had the pheromones or anything that my futa-mother had. Women didn’t go wild with lust around me.
Jasmine led me upstairs to her bedroom. It was still pink like it had been since she was seven and her Dad painted it for her. She fell on her frilly bed, lying on her belly, her tablet resting before her. She swiped the screen to turn it on.
“Look at that dress,” she sighed, staring at the cover model. It was a picture of my half-sister, Nari. She was a singer growing in fame. “She’s so elegant.”
“Yeah,” I said, lying. “It’s a cute dress. I’d look great in it.”
“It have to be a different color, though. Lilac doesn’t look great with your hair color.”
“You blondes are lucky to get to wear everything,” I said, lying on my belly beside her, my legs thrust up in the air.
Jasmine swiped the screen and groaned as the picture of Markus Hemsworth in his role as the new Iron Man. He looked so buff and muscular. He had this toothy smile, his short, blond hair cut close. He had a chiseled chin. I should be attracted to him. I faked it.
“Oh, god, he’s making me wet,” I lied. “I would totally be his Pepper Potts.”
“Is that her name?” asked Jasmine. “You are such a nerd. I just saw the movie to see him, and he was in that dumb suit too much.”
I shrugged as she turned the page. She groaned at the shot of him in his swimsuit. “Look at that package. I heard he had a surgery to make himself more impressive. Like as big as Becky.”
I swallowed at the mention of my futa-mother.
“Is anyone as big as her?”
My friend shrugged. “Who knows. Maybe it’s just an urban legend that she’s got the world’s biggest cock.”
I squirmed.
“Never looked up any of her pics?” asked my friend.
“No.”
“I did, but they can do anything with computers.” She swiped the screen again. “Ooh, here’s a test to find your perfect boyfriend! Let’s take it!”
“Sure,” I said, grinning at my friend.
I could relax around Jasmine and just be a normal girl. We laughed and giggled, taking the quiz. My perfect guy was slender and tall with glasses, an effeminate and caring man. Jasmine’s was a muscular hunk who could bench-press a cheerleader.
We gossiped. We watched dumb videos off YouTube. The time flew. Before I knew it, Jasmine was hopping to her feet as she heard her father moving around downstairs. “I got to go! Daddy’s taking me to Eugene for shopping!”
For those of us in Jefferson, Eugene was great, but going to Portland would be even better.
“Get something cute for the first day of college!” I told her.
She nodded her head. “Making Daddy pay for missing my birthday.”
We headed downstairs together. Mrs. Minx was talking to her husband. She smiled at me and winked as Jasmine hooked her arm around her father’s and they pair bustled out. I shifted my hands, alone with the older woman.
“Well, the lawnmower is in the garage.” She played with her phone, typing on it. “There, you’re paid. Do you need any help with it?”
“I can figure it out,” I said, my phone beeping in my pocket. Probably a PayPal notification that I got money. I never used cash, though some old folks, like my mom, still used it.
I headed to the garage and found it. I figured out how to start it after a few tries. It was a cheap model, no self-automation to it. The lawnmower roared to life, and I set out. It was hot, but I was young and I went to work, pushing the lawnmower, trimming the grass. I worked through the front yard and then headed to the back.
They had a pool back there, dug by Mr. Minx a decade ago. I was just starting around the edge when Mrs. Minx came out in her bikini. I tried not to stare at her big boobs held in her purple triangles. They swayed and bobbed. The bottoms were a dainty thing, narrow cloth in the front and almost a thong in the back. Her skin was golden brown, her blonde hair bouncing about her face.
I gripped the lawnmower tight, staring at her as it roared away. I wasn’t pushing it, but those big boobs were just swaying. They were so large and soft. It was so much nicer to look at those and not at ugly boys. My futa-cock swelled harder, pulling at the tape, my pussy juices flowing. It soaked over my clit-dick.
Gorgeous. Jasmine but with big boobs and… and…
Mrs. Minx glanced at me and smile. Her mouth moved, but I couldn’t hear her over the lawnmower.
Then it hit me. She saw me staring at her. My cheeks burned while my nipples throbbed. I squeezed my thighs tight about my tucked clit-dick. Hot blood pumped through my body. I swallowed and released the lawnmower’s handle, the engine dying at once.
“Sorry, Mrs. Minx,” I said, my ears ringing.
“I was asking if you’d spread the tanning lotion on my back,” she said, holding the bottle of oil in her hand.
A nervous twist shot through me. Her skin was so beautiful. If I touched her… What if did things to her? What if I lost control? My futa-mother was wild. She just fucked any woman she wanted. She went for them, and they never said no.
What if I put the moves on my mom’s friend and…? And…?
Jasmine would kill me if she found I did anything with her mom. Plus her mom was straight. Married. Mrs. Minx would freak out if I touched her. I shuddered, my pussy growing hotter and hotter. This wild heat surged through my body. I licked my lips, my heart pounding in my chest.
I swallowed, my hands flexing and undulating. This heat washed through me. My heart pounded as I advanced on the MILF. I licked my lips, this delight flooding through my body. Her back looked so lush. Her skin so silky.
“Well, come on, dear,” Mrs. Minx said. “Don’t be shy. It’s not like you’ve never put lotion on Jasmine’s back.”
Well, Jasmine was different. She was my friend.
I couldn’t think of any excuse to get out of this. Trembling, I advanced on Mrs. Minx, my feet feeling so heavy. They seemed to drag across the lawn. My heart beat faster and faster. These waves of heat washed out of me and spilled through me.
I reached the cement patio. I knelt on the chaise lounge behind her. The vinyl creaked beneath my knees. I took the bottle from her as she pulled her hair out of the way, exposing the sweep of her tanned shoulders.
I spilled the oil into my hands, the amber pooling in my palms. It had a lavender scent to it. I breathed it in, loving the scent. My dick throbbed harder, my pussy juices flowing as I stared at her back. I bit my lip, my body trembling. I washed my hands together and then I spread it across her back.
“Oh, wait,” she said, her hand darting behind her. I gasped as she pulled on the string. It fell away, exposing all of her back. “I don’t want to get any tan lines back there.”
“Oh, sure,” I said. That made sense.
My hands moved down the older woman’s back. I was caressing her skin. The ties fell away. I could just see the profile of her right breast. The triangle was dangling over it now, loose. Her breasts swayed back and forth as she breathed, the cloth moving before it.
I couldn’t take my eyes away from her breast. I could see her side-boob, that wonderful sweep of her flesh that made me just want to reach around and grasp her. I just wanted to squeeze and knead and massage it. I licked my lips, my pussy clenching. My hips wiggled back and forth, the blood pounding through my veins.
This was delicious. Incredible. I was so eager for it. I grinned at her, my fingers dribbling with oil. It was a treat. I couldn’t wait to massage her. I would sweep my fingers across her flesh. I stroked her back, working the lotion into her silky skin.
My dick twitched, throbbed as I worked lower and lower, my eyes locked on that boob. She twisted to stare at me, her breast swaying. The cloth slipped for a moment, a dusky nipple peeking out for a moment.
Thick, fat, hard.
“You’re blushing,” said Mrs. Minx. “Is everything okay?”
“I’m…” I swallowed. “Of course. I was just thinking about a boy.”
“That Markus Hemsworth?” she asked, a teasing tone to her words.
“Yeah,” I said, trying not to stare at her breast as I went lower. My fingers caressed her back. I loved the touch of her skin. I wanted to massage her breasts, tease her, make her shudder.
“I bet,” she said. “Getting all excited. Mmm, I remember being your age.”
I breathed in deeply, her breast swaying again as she moved, her top swinging, her nipple flashing. I wanted to groan. My fingers brushed the bottom off her suit, feeling the start of her rump’s swell. I dug into them and…
I ripped my hand away. “I’m all done!” I gasped, my cheeks on fire. “Anything else?”
Mrs. Minx turned on the chaise lounge, throwing her left leg over the seat so she straddled it, thighs spread wide. Her bikini bottom molded to her pussy lips. Was she shaved? I could see her plumpness. The cloth was so tight against her sex.
My heart screamed in my chest.
“Well, since your hands are oily,” she said, reaching behind her neck to untie the second knot of her bikini top. It fell down to her lap, exposing her breasts.
Her tits were all golden brown. No tan lines at all.
“Could you do the front, too?” The older woman gave me an arched smile. “That would be sweet.”
“Your front,” I groaned, staring at those breasts. My face was no fire. My dick was fully hard. I was so uncomfortable. I shifted as I knelt on the chaise lounge. My dick pulsed and throbbed against the tape holding it against my juicy cunt. I swallowed, my cheeks burned.
I started at her shoulders, coating her tan skin in oil. This was something girls did for each other, right? I mean, just putting oil on. It wasn’t sexual or anything. We were both into guys. She had no idea that I liked her boobs. That I wanted to touch them. To bury my face between them.
She was Jasmine’s mom! I couldn’t do that.
I rubbed my hands down her arms, coating them in the oil. She had toned muscles, not defined, but she was in great shape. I caressed her skin, rubbing my slick hands down both her arms as her breasts swayed before me. I tried to stare into her eyes and not ogle her lush titties.
“Mmm, thank you,” she said as I poured more oil on my hands. “Sometimes, I just like to be babied, you know?”
“I guess,” I said, my voice hoarse.
“Women deserve to be pampered every so often,” she continued as I worked the oil across her upper chest. I caressed her neck, leaving her skin gleaming, then slid down to just the start of her breasts. Excess liquid ran amber down to her swelling tits, rolling over those tanned, lush mounds.
I could just slide lower, touch them, squeeze them. They were so big. The tape weakened. Peeling from my skin as my cock sough to burst free. If I wasn’t wearing panties and jean shorts, my dick would break free, the tape unable to stop my erection from escaping.
It hurt, but felt great. My pussy lips were engorged, my virgin flesh trying to swallow my cock. My juices were soaking everything. I’d never been so wet in my life. Real, live tits were right here before me.
I slid my hands down her sides.
“Oh, no, you missed this spot.” she said, grabbing my wrists and bringing my hands up to her breasts, pressing them against her lush, plump tits.
My eyes widened. My fingers flexed against her soft breasts. “M-Mrs. Minx?”
“Don’t want these beautiful breasts to burn, do you?” Mrs. Minx purred, rubbing my oily hands across her tits.
“No,” I groaned as she pressed the palms of my hands against her nipples. They were hard and fat against my skin. The feel of those nubs made my cock ache and throb. I whimpered, my dick twitching, struggling, begging to be freed.
“No, no, you’ve always loved my tits, Alyessa,” she cooed, her blue yes bright. “Always staring at them. Ogling them. My daughter doesn’t know, does she?”
“That I’m… a lesbian?” I croaked, my voice tight, raw.
“No, that you’re a futa.”
I gasped as she said that word. My fingers dug into her flesh.
“I’ve always known,” Mrs. Minx purred, her hands sliding up my own, letting me squeeze and knead her tits all on their own. I couldn’t help myself. I knew that she was my friend’s mother. I shouldn’t be doing this, but… Her breasts were just so large and plump and soft and amazing.
“I knew your mother fucked Becky, the lucky slut. And your futa-mother always breeds a woman.” A shiver ran through Mrs. Minx as her hands reached my shoulders. Her head leaned in. “I’ve been watching you grow up, waiting for you to flaunt your futaness. To announce the world that you were like your mother, but you’re scared, aren’t you?”
“I… I… I’m so different,” I whimpered. “I’m a freak.”
“A beautiful, delicious futa-freak,” Mrs. Minx cooed, her lips coming closer. Her blue eyes swam before me, her golden hair swaying about her face, rustled by the breeze. “Just succulent. Perfect.”
My fingers dug into her breasts.
“You’re married,” I gasped.
“My husband’s not here.”
“But… but… Jas—”
Her lips captured mine.
I couldn’t think. My brain boiled beneath the heat of her kiss. Her fingernails bit into my shoulders as she clutched me. My palms massaged her oily boobs, rubbing them in slow circles as she shuddered. Her tongue danced with mine, teasing me.. I groaned, my lips moving against hers, teasing, kissing her.
This heat billowed through me. This wonderful delight that had my heart screaming in my chest. I whimpered into her kiss. Our lips worked together. I fluttered my tongue, caressing her. Dizzying waves washed through me. My eyes squeezed shut as this heat swelled and swelled in me.
I kissed her with such passion. Our tongues danced and dueled and caressed each other. The wonderful, wicked, naughty play of our tongues shot pleasure down to my aching dick. I groaned, my dick twitching and throbbing.
My passion swelled and swelled. I fluttered my tongue through her mouth. It was such a wicked delight to experience. To taste her. This was a hot treat that made my entire body quiver and shudder in delight. I groaned into her mouth, teasing her. Our tongues dueled together, fluttering, batting, attacking each other.
I broke the kiss, panting, my heart racing. My cheeks burned with the passion surging through my veins. I felt dizzy, disoriented. I shook my head, struggling to clear my thoughts. I blinked my eyes, my chest feeling so tight all of sudden.
I licked my lips, loving the taste of hers lingering on mine. “Mrs. Minx!” I groaned. My hands squeezed into her tits. “We can’t do this!”
“Oh, honey, we can,” she said, her hand darting down to my shorts, reaching between my thighs to rub at my poor cock tucked between my thighs. “We have to free this beauty. You deserve pleasure.”
her hand slid up as I kept massaging her oily tits. The world spun around me as my best friend’s mother unfastened the button of my denim shorts. The zipper rasped as my fly opened. I groaned as she shoved her hand inside. Her fingers slid beneath the waistband of my panties.
“Ooh, you’re shaved,” she said as she crossed my pubic mound. “Mmm, I like that. I’m shaved, too. I like the feel of being bare.”
“Makes it… easier to tape up,” I moaned. “Less painful.”
She winced. “Like a wax and…” She slid her hand over my cock tucked against my pussy. “Oh, honey, you shouldn’t hide this.”
“I want to be like everyone else,” I groaned, my heart beating in my chest. “A normal girl.”
“Oh, honey, no one is normal.” Her tongue flicked over her plump, kissable lips. Her other hand was shoving down my shorts as she stroked her finger up and down my cock’s length. “We’re all different from each other. And that’s good. Celebrate it. Don’t be ashamed of who you are. What you want. You’re a futa. There’s only a few thousand of you in the world, and most are kids.
“They don’t get to do naughty things like this.”
I gasped as she pushed my panties down next. The frilly cloth joined my jeans bunched down at my knees. The tape ripped free of my skin. She pulled my cock free of my pussy lips. It sprang out engorged before me, thrusting at her belly, twitching, throbbing. My juicy labia were stretched around the base of my shaft. My cock grew from my pussy folds. My juices coated the shaft while two pieces of beige tape clung to it.
She tore those off then stroked my dick. The sexy MILF pumped her hands up and down my futa-cock. I groaned. Her touch was exciting. Another person was stroking me. My hands squeezed her tits, fingers digging into her flesh.
The pleasure shot through me. My virgin pussy clenched. My ovaries boiled over. With a groan, I erupted. I couldn’t help myself. It was all too much: massaging her then having her hot hand caressing me. My body shook. My boobs jiggled in my top.
My cum splattered her belly, coating her smooth flesh in my pearly spunk. I gasped and groaned, each pulse firing pleasure that shot to my mind. My pussy convulsed. My sweet musk filled my nose. Stars burst across my eyes.
I trembled, my cock bouncing in her grip. My cum splattered her stomach and landed on her bikini bottom. It soaked through to her married pussy. I groaned at that, my pleasure intensifying. My toes curled in my sandals.
“Mrs. Minx!” I shrieked.
“Mmm, honey yes, you are a virgin,” she purred in delight. Her hand swiped up a line of my cum dribbling across her belly. She brought it to her lips and popped the pearly spunk into her mouth. “Ooh, that’s good. I like that.”
“I… I… I’m so sorry for cumming on you!” Panic shot through me. I jerked my hand away. I knew girls didn’t like guys who came prematurely. I wanted to bolt, but she still gripped my cock.
“It’s okay,” she said. “You’re a little over-eager. I know just the thing, though, to get you ready.”
She leaned down, licking those plump lips. I groaned as her blonde hair fell over my thighs, draping my dick. I couldn’t see, but I could feel. Her mouth nuzzled against the softening tip of my cock. Her tongue flicked out across the slit.
Pleasure shot down my shaft. It was intense. My cunt clenched. I moaned, eyes widening.
“Mmm, yes, your futa-cum is just delicious,” she purred. “A definite treat. Just yummy. I love it.”
She engulfed the tip of my cock. She sucked on it hard. Her cheeks hollowed. My eyes rolled back in my head. She danced her tongue over it, making me shiver. My eyes fluttered as the pleasure shot down my shaft to my pussy. My head swayed. This wonderful treat washed through my body. I flexed my fingers.
“Mrs. Minx!” I gasped as she nursed on my cock. Every time she sucked my cunt squeezed shut. “Oh, Mrs. Minx, that’s… that’s…”
I couldn’t describe the feelings. Her tongue danced around the crown of my futa-cock. My dick throbbed in her hand as she made such slurping sounds. Naughty, wanton noises. Her supple back gleamed in the sunlight. My fingers twitched. I didn’t know what to do with my hands as she loved my shaft.
My futa-dick was swelling. Engorging. I was getting hard again. I wasn’t like my futa-mother. I didn’t have her stamina, but she was coaxing me erect again. I let out wicked moans as her head bobbed, her lips sliding up and down my half-hard cock.
Her fingers slid down my shaft to my pussy. I gasped as she stroked my juicy lips. She caressed over my folds, brushing my hymen. A dizzy heat swept through me. Mrs. Minx’s touch was so naughty. The pleasure rippled up to my shaft buried in her mouth.
She moaned. Her buzzing passion caressed my dick.
“Mrs. Minx!” I gasped, my cock aching, feeling fully hard.
She sucked up my shaft until her mouth popped off my dick with a wet plop. She let out a purring moan of delight, her hips wiggling from side to side. She stared up at me with hungry eyes. A big grin spread across her face.
“Well, well, well, what a delicious treat,” she purred. “You’re getting your second wind. I bet young futas like you can just cum over and over again.”
“I… I don’t… that often,” I moaned.
“You don’t even masturbate this beautiful dick?” she moaned, stroking me as she rose before me, her breast heaving, nipples beading with the tanning oil. “You poor thing. Why are you denying yourself? You can’t hate this wonderful cock.”
“I… I…”
“Let me show you how wonderful it is,” she said, stroking me with her right hand while her left reached for the knot holding her bikini bottom closed at her hip. She tugged.
I groaned as the triangle fell halfway down, exposing her shaved pudenda almost to her pussy’s beginning. Her left hand reached across her stomach, undoing the other knot. The cloth dropped away. Her thick labia, covered in her glistening cream, revealed.
She was so wet. For me.
Her left hand hooked the back of my neck, sliding beneath my strawberry-blonde locks. She pulled me towards her as she leaned back on the chaise lounge. I was on top of her before I knew it, her right hand guiding my cock between her spread-open thighs.
I groaned, pressing my body into her oily flesh. The tanning lotion bled through my tank top and bra, soaking my hard nipples. Our lips met, her tongue darting into my mouth. Then my dick brushed the engorged folds of her pussy.
I gasped in delight. This heat shot through me. This wonderful delight that had me aching. I groaned into her mouth. My tongue dueled with hers. A naughty heat billowed through me. I squirmed atop her, my dick rubbing into her cunt, finding the entrance.
I pressed into that hot, juicy snatch of hers.
I moaned into her mouth as I sank into my first pussy. This was Jasmine’s mom! I was sliding into a married woman’s snatch. I knew her all my life. She was almost like a second mother to me, and now I was in her.
Hot, silky, amazing flesh engulfed my dick. Her juicy flesh squeezed around me. I shuddered atop her as her tongue dueled with mine. It was incredible. It was unlike masturbating. This rush shot through me.
Maybe… maybe I didn’t need to feel bad about having a futa-cock.
I bottomed out in her. My breasts pressed against hers, separated only by my clothing. The oil soaked my top as I squirmed atop her. I moved my hips by instinct, stirring my cock through her juicy, married depths.
Then I drew back.
My cock slid out of her. This wondrous heat billowed through me. I groaned, my tongue dueling with her. Her flesh clung to me, squeezing around me. This silky friction created this bliss that radiated down to my cunt.
My pussy grew hotter, wetter. My ovaries were brimming with a new load of cum. A load I wanted to spurted into her married depths. With a groan, I thrust my hips forward, burying back into her wet warmth. She shuddered beneath me, groaning into my kiss.
I was making love to a woman.
My mind reeled from that thought as my hips moved. My pussy clenched every time I thrust into her. Silky friction became wondrous rapture. It flowed down my cock, melting my cunt. I reveled in her snatch, pumping away hard and fast.
My tongue swept around hers as we kissed. My blood screamed through my veins, carrying the ecstasy through my body. I felt her nipples through my clothing, my own nubs aching. The chaise lounge creaked.
Both her hands grabbed my naked rump, pulling on me. She broke the kiss, moaning, “Yes, yes! I’ve always wanted to enjoy a futa! Ooh, Alyessa! Your dick is amazing! It’s wonderful! Oh, yes, yes!”
“So is your… your…” I shuddered, thrusting hard into her depths.
“My cunt?” she asked in a naughty breathy tone, her fingers digging into my rump. “Tell me how much you love my cunt!”
“It’s amazing, Mrs, Minx!” I moaned, thrusting into her pussy. “I love being in your… your cunt!”
She shuddered beneath me and kissed me again. I thrust my tongue into her mouth as I pounded her pussy. My dick plunged in and out of her faster and faster. That wonderful, explosive ache built and built at the tip of my cock.
I groaned, coming closer and closer to that eruption. The heat swelled through my pussy. My body squirming, nipples throbbing as the rubbed against her breasts. My nose nuzzled against hers, teasing her.
“Alyessa!” she moaned. “Ooh, yes, yes, fuck my cunt! Damn, you’re bigger than my husband! You’re a futa! You got a pussy!”
Her right hand shot down around the curve of my rump, sliding between my thighs to cup my pussy. I gasped as she stroked my folds, teasing me as I thrust over and over into her cunt. Her fingers pressed on my hymen.
“A sexy futa with a juicy pussy!” she moaned. “Ooh, you’re not a girl any longer. You’re an adult. A futa-woman!”
She thrust her fingers against my hymen. I gasped, burying my cock into her juicy embrace as my maidenhead stretched and stretched. She had a wicked grin on her face, her pussy clenching around my dick.
My cherry popped.
A flash of pain shot through me and then soothing bliss followed. Her two fingers filled me. I groaned atop her, rubbing my nose into her face as she pumped her digits in and out of my cunt. She stirred me up, teased me. I whimpered, my cunt clenching about her. This delicious pleasure flowed through me.
“Oh, wow,” I whimpered. “Oh, Mrs. Minx. Mmm, that’s nice. Ooh, you’re fingers are in me. That’s so wicked.”
“Uh-huh,” she said, a big grin crossing her face. “You just love it, don’t you?” She laughed. “Of course you do. You’re a naughty, wanton, little futa-slut!”
I groaned as her fingers churned up my pussy. She teased me, made me whimper and shudder. Her pussy clenched around my dick as I thrust into her. I pumped away at her snatch harder as she worked her fingers in and out of my twat.
The dual stimulation shot through me. My pussy clenched on her fingers while my futa-dick drove over and over into her snatch. The twin delights mixed and swirled around my ovaries. They grew tighter and tighter.
A heady shake sent dizzying rapture spilling over me. I whimpered, pumping so hard, so fast. I buried to the hilt in her. I groaned, thrusting harder, faster. I grinned at her, loving the delight of her fingers teasing me.
“Mmm, you like that?” she hissed, arching an eyebrow. “Ooh, yes, you do. You just like that treat. You’re pumping away at my cunt harder. Faster. Ooh, you’re a naughty thing. You’re going to make me cum on this big dick!”
“Yes!” I moaned, lost to this rapture. I pumped away at her with a frantic rhythm, her fingers inspiring me as they plundered my pussy’s deflowered depths.
The ache swelled at the tip of my cock. The friction of her pussy brought me closer and closer to that release. I kissed her again, my tits pressing tight into her pillowy mounds. My pussy clenched about her digits as I buried into her.
Her cunt writhed about my cock.
I groaned as I felt her buck and shudder beneath me. She squealed into the kiss as her snatch sucked at my dick. I drew back through her writhing folds, my eyes widening at the increased bliss surging through me.
“Mrs. Minx?” I gasped.
“Yes, yes, I’m cumming!” the MILF howled. “I’m cumming on your big futa-dick! Oh, Alyessa, fire in me! Flood me! I want to feel a sexy futa cum in my cunt!”
I rammed to the hilt in her, her fingers burying deep into my twat. I gasped as my cum fired out of my dick. That powerful eruption shot rapture straight to my mind. My pussy convulsed around her digits while her cunt milked my cock.
“Mrs. Minx!” I cried out. “Oh, yes, yes! That’s so good!”
“Spill that cum in me!” the MILF moaned. Her married pussy writhed about me, spasming with a hunger that made every eruption of my futa-jizz feel incredible.
Darkness washed across my vision. Rapture rippled out of my cunt while my euphoria pummeled my mind senseless. I collapsed on her chest, panting, groaning, shuddering in delight. I just fucked my best friend’s mom.
Through the daze of pleasure, a sudden surge of panic shot through me.
“No, no, no,” I groaned, my dick spurting a final blast of cum into her depths. “I shouldn’t have done this. Jasmine’s going to kill me!”
I struggled to get away, but Mrs. Minx held me tight. The MILF grabbed the back of my neck, kissing me, my dick buried in her pussy. I knew I should go, should flee before we did more naughty things, but her mouth was so hot.
My cock was twitching in her pussy.
I couldn’t help it. I hated how much of a horny, pervy futa I was.
I felt so bad for doing this to Jasmine even as I kissed her mother. I was a terrible person. Why did I have to be born a futa? If I was normal, I never would have fucked this sexy MILF. I would never have betrayed my best friend.
Jasmine could never find out about this.
To be continued…
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Okay that’s very different and it will be very interesting where this goes and I wish I didn’t have to wait to find out!
Well, just a week. Glad you liked it!
Meh Im a little tired of this series as its so over the top and predictable. I can already assume the friend wont give a single shit that her friend banged her mom and will sleep with her friend on a whim. I get its all erotica and you do a good job of framing sexy scenes (even if you use dirty talk with bizarre vernacular no actual person would far too much) but the stories have started to feel somehat repetitive. Theres no actual depth to any of the characters because at the end of the day they all worship whichever MC it happens to be and are always willing to do literally anything for them.
I get its smut but I feel like sometimes the stories themselves are on the verge of being interesting and every time they fall apart and I go back to skipping to the smut.
I dont mean this as trash talk or anything it’s just as a long time reader I notice the same patterns in nearly all your work. It’d be interesting to see you venture a bit more out of your comfort zone. I feel like you used to more often for example with the story of the mother manipulating the father into getting with his sleeping daughter, which was insanely dark as an implication – and disturbingly hot. Although in the end even that finished in another standard harem ending.
Sorry for the long rant its just years of reading your stuff has sort of left me burnt out maybe. I really have enjoyed your work sometimes i just wish it was less formulaic and left me guessing and went different places in narrative.
Thank you for the feedback. I get that. It’s a balance act between smut and story and maybe I am getting repetitive. You gave me something to think about. I kinda feel like erotica should have happy endings, I guess, so it does sometimes drive me in certain directions.
I think there can still be a generally happy ending, but maybe not the standard harem ending every time. The Devil’s Pact which is the story I started with from you (and read pretty much from the first chapters release) was definitely dark and not really standard harem in the sense that the MC was most certainly a villain, I wouldn’t really have called the ending to that story completely happy.
But honestly it’s not about whether or not it’s happy, I don’t mind happy endings, I just feel your stuff has become too predictable, but then again for people who haven’t read ALL your stuff it might not feel that way, or for somebody who literally only cares about the smut itself. There’s only so many times I can personally read about a harem obsessed with young teenage hunk X or sexy futa godess Y before it starts to wear just a little bit thin. And I still enjoy the smut but the framework of the stories feels like a record on repeat.
A more interesting happy ending to me would be one where the MC actually has to make human concessions, like maybe he (or she) can have a semi open relationship, maybe they can explore threesomes but there still be an expectation that their partner comes way before all that and there’s actually jealousy involved (because humans are selfish and jealous creatures and that’s OK). Or maybe have a bit of a darker edge to the mind control stories, the MC actually questioning their own morality, their own sanity in shaping other peoples minds to love them, maybe ending things with a bit of a twist. Also even harems themselves can have twists, like instead of the male young lead every time why not a mother manipulating her husband into sleeping with their daughters to feed some crazy fetish of hers and making it very much focused on her controlling aspect. That’s just an example but even a harem can have a large twist to it that doesn’t just devolve into woshipping some hot young guys cock.
All of this is just suggestions ultimately it’s your stories I’ve just been reading them for years and have had the nagging feeling over the last year or two that they all seem kind of the “the same”. And the formula does mostly work it’d just be cool to see a story like “Sleeping Daughter” (my favorite of your works) where the daughter actually IS ill, the parents actually ARE evil and they actually pay for their crimes. Maybe I’m fucked in the head but I feel like something like that would be both hotter to read but also then more realistic – and perhaps even cathartic – to finish as the perpetrators are punished. Albeit the daughters life would likely be forever tarnished in such a scenario.
I also sort of wish you went back to some dom stuff like you did with Becoming Daddy’s Good Girl, more edgy stuff like The Vampires Kiss maybe. A lot of your newer stuff is just “MC goes and fucks lots of girls who all absolutely love him/her and his/her cock for no discernible reason”, I get they’re supposed to be simple hot power fantasies and that’s perfectly OK and if that’s what you want to write that’s fine, but you used to show spurts of more interesting stuff I feel. There was some emotion and edginess that made characters read differently before but now a lot of these MC’s read like the exact same person.
Very sorry for ranting for so long, again it’s your stuff and at the end of the day it is smut and you do smut pretty well overall, if nothing else you certainly pump out way more content than anyone else I know that is actually of decent quality and have done so for years so for that I commend you. I’ve never commented much before so I do want to say thanks for the content you have produced over the years.
Seems like my reply didn’t work so I’ll past it in two chunks due to length
I think there can still be a generally happy ending, but maybe not the standard harem ending every time. The Devil’s Pact which is the story I started with from you (and read pretty much from the first chapters release) was definitely dark and not really standard harem in the sense that the MC was most certainly a villain, I wouldn’t really have called the ending to that story completely happy.
But honestly it’s not about whether or not it’s happy, I don’t mind happy endings, I just feel your stuff has become too predictable, but then again for people who haven’t read ALL your stuff it might not feel that way, or for somebody who literally only cares about the smut itself. There’s only so many times I can personally read about a harem obsessed with young teenage hunk X or sexy futa godess Y before it starts to wear just a little bit thin. And I still enjoy the smut but the framework of the stories feels like a record on repeat.
A more interesting happy ending to me would be one where the MC actually has to make human concessions, like maybe he (or she) can have a semi open relationship, maybe they can explore threesomes but there still be an expectation that their partner comes way before all that and there’s actually jealousy involved (because humans are selfish and jealous creatures and that’s OK). Or maybe have a bit of a darker edge to the mind control stories, the MC actually questioning their own morality, their own sanity in shaping other peoples minds to love them, maybe ending things with a bit of a twist. Also even harems themselves can have twists, like instead of the male young lead every time why not a mother manipulating her husband into sleeping with their daughters to feed some crazy fetish of hers and making it very much focused on her controlling aspect. That’s just an example but even a harem can have a large twist to it that doesn’t just devolve into woshipping some hot young guys cock.
part 2 of reply sorry for length again
All of this is just suggestions ultimately it’s your stories I’ve just been reading them for years and have had the nagging feeling over the last year or two that they all seem kind of the “the same”. And the formula does mostly work it’d just be cool to see a story like “Sleeping Daughter” (my favorite of your works) where the daughter actually IS ill, the parents actually ARE evil and they actually pay for their crimes. Maybe I’m fucked in the head but I feel like something like that would be both hotter to read but also then more realistic – and perhaps even cathartic – to finish as the perpetrators are punished. Albeit the daughters life would likely be forever tarnished in such a scenario.
aaaaand part 3 (not sure why it makes me break it all up like this)
I also sort of wish you went back to some dom stuff like you did with Becoming Daddy’s Good Girl, more edgy stuff like The Vampires Kiss maybe. A lot of your newer stuff is just “MC goes and fucks lots of girls who all absolutely love him/her and his/her cock for no discernible reason”, I get they’re supposed to be simple hot power fantasies and that’s perfectly OK and if that’s what you want to write that’s fine, but you used to show spurts of more interesting stuff I feel. There was some emotion and edginess that made characters read differently before but now a lot of these MC’s read like the exact same person.
And finally part 4 (clearly this comment system not made for this length)
Very sorry for ranting for so long, again it’s your stuff and at the end of the day it is smut and you do smut pretty well overall, if nothing else you certainly pump out way more content than anyone else I know that is actually of decent quality and have done so for years so for that I commend you. I’ve never commented much before so I do want to say thanks for the content you have produced over the years.
Don’t apologize for the long rant. It’s great to get some feedback. Gives me some things to ponder. Brother’s Incestuous Bet is nearing its end, so I’ll think about mixing things up. It’s okay to be fucked in the head. I want to write some more mind control tales, not sure as dark as you suggest. That’s not necessarily what I like. Would like to write some Dom stuff, too. That’s always fun, and I’ve been thinking about Vampires again.
So your first reply was moderated by my blog’s spam filter. Not sure why. it has a different username but the same IP and email address. When comments don’t show up, it’s just because I have to moderate it. After I’ve moderated your comment a few times, it usually lets them through after that. Not sure what happened there.
After seeing your initial comment yesterday I wasn’t sure whether or not I wanted to comment on your statements but as this is already a wall of text, who cares if I add some more, don’t you think?!?
I totally agree that the amount of text on this blog is enormous. And I have said in another comment to another story how awesome this texts are (in terms of quality) just a few days ago.
Given your classification I’m somewhere in the process of getting to know this way of story telling (although there aren’t many stories left I haven’t completed yet). 😉 There are often situations where I realize what some mentioned details will lead to, but I’m also surprised on a regular basis. And honestly, I doubt that you can predict every twist, but I get your point that the overall story development shows some repetitive patterns. I guess I focus more on the story’s details here.
Just as you mentioned Vampire’s kiss I was ‘yeah, right, that awesome story, why aren’t there more of this style?’. Hence, I would agree that the new stuff hasn’t the same wide range of topics that the previous stories had defined. But there are also new ideas coming up every now and then, so given that there is a limit of chapters that can come out per week (or stories per year), I guess it is very hard to fulfill every reader’s desires. And I guess that it’s also hard to write another Vampire’s kiss that would be as good as the existing one but at the same time somehow something new and different. And every reader will favor others of the existing stories …
And in terms of mind-control stories: There aren’t much approaches left. Devil’s Pact and Battered Lamp had mind control through a divine being, Institute of Apotheosis had a scientific way of controlling others, BimboTech was also a science way but with a bit of a twist, if I remember correctly Boarding School had some mind-control by alien (technology), Incestuous harem could be seen as mind control by charisma (and partially black-mailing), even (the original) First Futa had some mind control aspects to it (every female demanding sex with her). So any new mind control story will revive some aspects of already existing stories (what isn’t bad in general – I just want to say that creating something complete new is difficult). And the possible range in the field of incest is even more limited: siblings, parent with child, and this covers already at least 90% of all incest stories. We haven’t seen a cross-over of incest and futas yet (or was there some in the last futa fairy chapter?) but would this be so much new??
I have to admit, I have some suggestions for new stories, too. The thing is, I’m not sure whether it makes any sense to tell them. The one big experience that conflicts with the intention is Converting the Family. This was a reader-suggested story and the overall feedback on this blog wasn’t that positive. I would even claim that I had spotted some passages where Reed wasn’t that happy with writing it (don’t know if I could point to them anymore) but maybe that was an illusion. Also, I like almost all stories so it is very likely that my suggestions wouldn’t be so much off his comfort zone. But in the end it’s the author’s believe in his own story that brings it to live. And suggestions that doesn’t feel right to the author can’t yield great stories.
What I already criticized somewhere else are the short stories. I agree that there isn’t much depth to the characters in those three-chapter-stories. The most obvious explanation for me is that the limit of words doesn’t allow any real character (development). For the longer ones I really can’t see this problem at all.
PS: Only because this is erotica (with taboo topics) this doesn’t make the stories less valuable than other texts in general. There are, for sure, tons of low quality porn stories but I would never rank erotica (regardless of the topics) lower than other writings just because it’s porn or just because it covers incest. I think we just need someone like Clint in the newest incestuous harem story (advocating bigamy) who advocates (taboo) porn to a wider audience and campaigns for a greater acceptance. Not that we couldn’t use some more bigamy in RL, too.
Thanks for the feedback. Great to digest. I feel bad that I’m not answering with a huge wall of text myself. Finding new ideas can be difficult to do different types of stories. I have some ideas for stuff. I think editing reality which will be replacing The Rogue’s Harem will be another twist on mind control genre. I’ve been having fun writing it. That, too me, is my number one thing. I want to write stories that I find enjoyable. I dont’ like to sit down and feel like it’s a chore. I think best writing comes out of that.
Yes, it would be cool if mainstream erotica would be more acceptable, but there’s always these minority groups that like to find edgy subjects and then use them as a platform to complain and leverage power over an institution. We saw that with the religious right in the 80s and 90s, and now we’re seeing with the regressive left in the modern time. Pretending virtue to seize power and then duping people who just want to appear good into following along. Corporations adverse to controversy tend to then be reactionary and remove the topic.
I said I don’t want to make suggestions because they haven’t worked out well. What I meant was story-suggestions. What I want to do now is to make a character-suggestion (it’s in my mind for weeks now and this is just the time it breaks free 😉 ). This might not go well with your audience, too, but perhaps this lets you think a bit out of the box and gives you some inspiration of what you could change for your stories to cover some different interests. You may take this as a blue-print and use it as a whole or just adopt aspects of it, I don’t mind (actually I would like to see some protagonists like this, but if it isn’t working out for you as the author, then I’m fine with that, too, I also like to read the stories as they are).
Mind control isn’t real (at least I hope so). And I really can’t tell what I would do if I had such powers. But I think I wouldn’t be as direct as most of your characters. The blue-print for your characters is more or less based on two commands: 1.) Have sex with me. And 2.) Think that this is normal. Sometimes also 3.) Find me others to have sex with. This often involves that every new character has to be commanded at least to act like command 2 otherwise something unpleasant would happen (protagonist being arrested, etc). That means that the protagonist always has to watch his environment.
I don’t know whether you’re familiar with the anime Code Geass (and that’s definitely a recommendation whether or not you adopt this idea). There, the protagonist gains such powers, too. But his powers have a limitation that he can only command someone once. After he learns that nothing happens when he tries to command someone again, he develops a strategy and plans ahead. He thinks twice before commanding someone (e.g. if he commands someone to make him a sandwich he looses the chance to command the same person later on to save his life, or so – I’m not spoiling anything, that’s just an example). Most of the time he doesn’t command a certain (intermediate) goal but loyalty to him in general or a certain reaction in the future. He tries to avoid commanding certain people at all, probably because he loves them or wants to have companions that don’t follow him just because of his commands. That kind of things.
I don’t know if you would need a similar limitation to make this sound natural for your protagonist. And based on the maxim “Nothing comes for free” I think more of your mind-control stories could definitely make use of limitations to the powers or some burden for using them. And I guess you’ll need direct commands here, too, like to stop cops from arresting him (or her? – I think you don’t have a longer mind-control story with a female main protagonist, yet) in difficult situations. And I know that all your stories need some sex and that such indirect commands would take some time to result in sex. But you can’t have the first three chapters or so without sex, so you’ll also have to somehow have sex from the start on. The idea here is, if someone new enters the scene, everything should be reasonable to explain without any new mind-control (not necessarily all the time, but usually).
I actually have made some similar comments in short form on amazon about plots repeating and some of the others issues you’ve committed on. I did not make an effort to read in full all of your points but I can say I agree for sure with them. I look forward to exactly how this will bring about changes in the stories that are to come.
There have also been many times what I expected wasn’t what I got but it’s rare. I do keep hoping for the story where it’s one on one love but that’s me. No matter what happens I’m sure I’ll at least try it.
Thanks for giving my stories a chance no matter what. If you’d like to give me some criticism, send me an email. Not saying don’t post reviews or anything, just I can respond and we can have a conversation.
I have a complaint probably on a completely separate note. And it’s about Becky, she was too perfect. She was the biggest, most prolific, most lust-driven pheromone riddled sex animal that stories about her daughters just don’t stack up. I would be much more interested in reading a story of young Becky again, or some new character that is just as extreme, or more so, than Becky was. While the stories themselves are perfectly erotic, they feel unsatisfying for me cause the characters come across as second-rate.
The world you managed to build is amazing so if there is a daughter out there, that can redefine hyperactive futa sexuality beyond what Becky did, I would urge you to write about her. Or, start a new series. The chapter where Becky fucks the entire cheerleader team was the hottest smut i’ve read in recent memory and you should aim to replicate that.
Anyways, I love your stories. Can’t wait to read what you write next.
Becky is over the top. I’m glad you loved reading about her antics, they were a lot of fun to write! Maybe some lost chapter of her life will re-surface one day. 😉