Editing Reality Book Three, Chapter Twelve: Wife’s Naughty Edits

 

Editing Reality

Book Three: Naughty Fantasies Unleashed

Chapter Twelve: Wife’s Naughty Edits

by mypenname3000

© Copyright 2019


Story Codes: Teen female/Teen female, Female/Teen female, Male/Female, Male/Teen female, Mind Control, Incestuous, Oral Sex, Anal, Voyeurism, Exhibitionism

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Becky Davies

“Oh, I can’t wait to have sex with Marissa,” moaned Sam. My younger sister squirmed on my bed. She’d just slipped in with me. She was spending the night in my room. She had a lot of options. We couldn’t stay with our parents tonight. For one, they were at the airport waiting for Marissa’s plane to land. For another, they wanted to enjoy Mom’s special lover together.

We were about to gain another mother. Marissa was marrying Mom and Dad. It was such an interesting thing. For most of my life, Marissa was just my mother’s best friend, the woman she went to Las Vegas a few times a year to visit. I had no idea until recently that she was even Mother’s lover.

It was so hot.

“I’m going to kiss her, of course,” said Sam as she rubbed her belly beside me. She squirmed her hips from side to side. Her small breasts quivering. Her green eyes fluttered. She was cute. “Mmm, I’ll kiss her, and Daddy will breed her.”

“You really like making sure girls are bred, don’t you?” I asked.

“Yep,” she said. Her eyes flicked to me. “Mmm, it’s super hot. Just like you. You’re making me so hot, you know that?”

“Am I?” I asked innocently. I was glad my sister was sleeping in here with me. She could be with one of the concubines, especially since three of them were her friends, or with one of the Anime girls that James had drawn. Sam loved those girls. My little sister was into all that stuff. Video games and Anime. I never had bothered with it.

“Oh, yes, super, duper hot!” She licked her lips around my tongue. Her thighs rubbed together. My clit throbbed and ached. “Mmm, makes me want to do things.”

She rolled over on her side and grabbed my boobies. I gasped at the shock shooting down to my cunt. That heat made me shudder. I groaned as she whimpered, kneading my tits. Her fingers were so wicked. They made me feel amazing. My pussy drank in the sensations. Her green eyes twinkled.

She sat up as she played with my tits. The pleasure rushed through me. My tits were as sensitive as my pussy. It made my cunt ache. It was such a delicious treat. I loved it. I groaned, my heart pounding in my chest as she played with them. She had this wicked gleam in her eyes as she found my nipples.

She twisted them.

“Oh, my god,” I gasped, the pleasure electrifying my body. My head swayed, my braid of hair spilling around me. “Sam!”

“Mmm, Becky and her boobies,” Sam said. She shifted and then threw her leg over my head. I stared up at her pussy. Shaved, her vulva parted to expose her pink, inner petals. A tart musk filled my nose as she lowered her twat.

She placed her cunt on my mouth. I shuddered, loving the incestuous contact of her pussy on my lips. She twisted my nipples. Pleasure surged through my body. My twat squeezed as the pleasure rushed through me. My tongue darted through her folds. I caressed at her snatch loving the taste of her.

I shuddered. My hips wiggled from side to side as I licked at her cunt. I thrust my tongue deep into her pussy’s depths. I savored the taste of her. That wonderful, tart passion. The pleasure rippled through my body. She pinched my nubs. Tweaked them.

She leaned over, her hands slipping away from my nipples. She stretched out, her stomach pressing into my sensitive breasts. Her nipples rubbed into my belly as her face nuzzled between my thighs. Into my twat.

“Mmm, sister-pussy!” Sam moaned. She squirmed on me. My little sister rubbed her face into my twat. She breathed in deeply. “Ooh, love that scent. That’s the scent of incest.”

I bucked on the bed, my sensitive nipples rubbing into her belly while her amazing tongue darted through my pussy folds. Sam knew how to eat cunt. My little sister was such a naughty minx. She caressed my labia. She swirled around my clit.

My hands grabbed her cute tush. I massaged her as her tongue fluttered through my folds. My body squirmed beneath her. My nipples ached and throbbed, shooting bliss down to my cunt. I latched onto her clit, sucking hard. My fingers kneaded her rump as I held her tight. I pulled her down to my face.

She moaned into my twat. “Ooh, that’s it. Such a naughty big sis. Eat my cunt! You’re going to make me cum!”

“Oh, yes, yes,” I moaned, my nipples throbbing. They were so sensitive, and her belly felt incredible. “I plan on it!”

My little sister dove her tongue deep into my pussy. She fluttered it around, such a naughty slut. She kept wiggling her hips, massaging her stomach across my nipples. It had to be deliberate. She knew that my nubs were enhanced by our daddy. That he had made them as sensitive as my clit. Pleasure rolled through me.

I wanted to make her feel as much bliss. My fingers slid down into her crack. I traveled lower and lower, searching for her naughty asshole. I found it, feeling her puckered sphincter. I pressed my digits against her backdoor.

I thrust three of them with ease into her bowels.

She felt almost pre-lubed. Her asshole drank in my three digits with almost no resistant. She moaned into my cunt. She fluttered her tongue through me. I pumped my digits in and out of her bowels. She moaned, squirming atop me.

“Yes, yes, that’s great!” Sam moaned. “Ooh, you are such a naughty big sis. Just work those fingers in and out of my cunt. Do it! Damn, yes!”

I sucked on her clit as I reamed her asshole. I savored the feel of her atop me. Eating me. Her tart juices coated the inside of my mouth. My nose nuzzled into her shaved folds. That wonderful, tangy delight filled my nostrils. Every breath made me shutter.

I inhaled deeply, my breasts rising, pressing my hard nipples tighter into her stomach. Delight shot down to my cunt. Her tongue danced around my clit. My orgasms swelled and swelled. I whimpered and groaned. I nibbled on her clit as I reamed her asshole.

“Are you going to cum?” Sam moaned. “Because I am. I’m going to explode on my big sis’s mouth! Yes, yes, yes!”

“Mmm, I’ll make you cum,” I moaned, my cunt clenching. The pleasure surged through my body. My tongue danced through her folds, licking and lapping.

Her bowels squeezed around my three digits. She whimpered into my cunt. Her lips sucked hard on my clit. My little nub throbbed and ached. I trembled beneath my sexy sister. The heat rippled through me.

It was just the best delight. Incest with my sister was amazing. My eyes squeezed shut. I whimpered. My nipples rubbed into her stomach. Her pussy rubbed across my lips. My orgasm swelled and swelled. This wonderful pleasure surged through my body.

She exploded on me. Her juices bathed my face while her asshole convulsed around my digits. Her cream soaked my mouth. It was an amazing treat. She squealed around my clit. She sucked so hard as I licked up her pussy.

“Yes, yes, yes!” I moaned. “Keep sucking. I’m almost there.” My nipples caressed her stomach. Dual blasts of lightning fired to my cunt. “Sam!”

I came on my little sister’s mouth.

My pussy cream gushed out of me. This amazing rush of bliss that flowed out of me. It was an amazing treat. A wonderful, wicked delight. Sparks flared. I whimpered and moaned. My fingers dug into her rump. My digits pulled her pussy against my mouth.

We moaned, cumming together. Sisters united in incest.

“Becky, yes!” Sam moaned, her asshole writhing around my fingers.

My tongue lapped up and down her pussy lips. I feasted on her cunt. I devoured her pussy juices while she did the same to mine. Waves of rapture swept through my body. Stars burst across my eyes. I whimpered. I groaned, my tongue burying into her spasming pussy.

We writhed together, our bodies spasming. My nipples drank in the feel of her silky stomach. Pleasure rushed through my flesh. My mind drank it in. I groaned as my eyes fluttered. My licks slowed to gentle laps at her twat as the pleasure died in me.

“Oh, my god, I love you,” Sam said. She spun around me in a flash, pressing against me and kissing me.

I held her tight, loving my little sister. The flavors of our pussies, tart and spicy, mixed together. I squeezed her tight. My nipples rubbed into her body. Naughty sparks burst through me. I whimpered, my fingers stroking her back.

She pulled her mouth away and rested her head on my shoulder. “We’re going to have so much fun with Marissa.”

I smiled at my sister. “Yes, we are. She’s not going to know what hit her when you descend.”

Sam giggled. “You’re an amazing big sis. I can’t believe we hated each other in the original timeline.”

I smiled. Our worldline had been changed by our daddy. We were closer than sisters should be. I held her tight as I closed my eyes and sank into sleep. When I woke up, my parents would be home with Marissa.

Our family was about to get a little naughtier.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Linda Davies

Reality paused.

Lilith shuddered as she watched. The silver-haired demon slid her hands up her body and squeezed her big boobs. I was doing this. I had Marissa, paused, pressed against me. On the other side of me lay my husband. He was asleep, finally passing out. It had been a long night. Since picking up Marissa at the airport after midnight and getting home with her, we’d been going at it hot and heavy.

Marissa was fitting in wonderfully. She was accepting my husband for the first time in my life. Steve had edited her and brought her into our marriage. I was so happy. It was why I had to ensure that we always had this power.

It was time for Steve to edit the only obstacle to our happiness. Sandalphon was Damocles’s sword hanging over us. A check on our power. If Steve went too far, the angel and his flaming sword would descend and end everything.

Unless Steve could edit the angel and make him serve us.

I shuddered. It would upgrade my husband’s phone, too. What would gaining an angel as powerful as Sandalphon do to his editing app? He had twelve charges. Six from Anael and six from Jophiel. By editing them, he’d doubled the number of charges they would give.

“Mmm, I can feel it,” Lilith said. “You’ve made your decision.”

“I have,” I said. My heart pounded beneath my chest. The pleasure rushing through my body. My thighs rubbed together, my pussy on fire. I was placing more power into my husband’s hands. That made me so wet.

I would support him. Help him. Guide how he used it the way a good wife should.

I opened my husband’s menu.

  • Steven Davies [Edited by the Most High]
    • Physical
    • Mental
    • Spiritual

I studied the menu, wondering how I should do this. I had helped my husband brainstorm modifying people and things before. I had a good idea how to do this. I tapped the Mental Menu.

  • Mental
    • Knowledge
    • Personality
    • Intellect
    • Illness

I studied my choices. Knowledge? I nodded, that was it. I clicked the Knowledge Sub-Menu.

  • Knowledge
    • Physical Skills
    • Artistic Skills
    • Sexual Skills
    • Memory

I hit Memory Sub-Menu and then the Addition Sub-Menu. That brought up a text box. A cursor blinked there. I could type in, adding knowledge for my husband to learn when time unpaused.

  • Steven will learn Sandalphon’s real name when he comes across it in a book. It will click in his mind and he will know that this is the angel’s name with a profound certainty.

I hoped that would work. I wasn’t sure, but it had to. That knowledge inserted, I backed out to the Main Menu and clicked on the Spiritual Menu.

  • Spiritual
    • Sexuality
    • Faith
    • Morality
    • Social
    • Aura

I knew this choice instantly. I just had to find it on the list. It was the last option. I clicked on the Aura Menu. Another text box appeared. My husband had no auras on him. The Most High hadn’t given him one, and my husband could never edit himself.

I was cheating. I was hacking into the system using the powers of Hell. If I was doing this for selfish reasons, I knew it would be bad. Have consequences. But I wasn’t. I was doing this out of love for my family. I wanted to preserve all our happiness. That made this right. I could feel it in my heart.

What I was doing was correct. Proper.

  • Steve Davies exudes an aura that will lead someone to leave behind a book that will give him the true name of Sandalphon.

“You have this look of elation on your face,” purred Lilith. “What are you up to?”

“Saving my family,” I told her.

“Mmm, noble,” Lilith said, a faint sneer in her voice. Derision dripped out of her.

I backed up to the Spiritual Menu and clicked the Sexuality Sub-Menu followed by the Desire Sub-Menu.

  • Desires
    • Deletion
    • Revision
    • Addition

I hit Addition so I could add a new passion in my husband’s life. Just learning Sandalphon’s name wasn’t enough. Steve could be stubborn when he wanted to. Especially when he was being principled. Already, he was against editing Sandalphon. He didn’t want to risk things. He thought things could keep going the way they were, but I recognized a threat. Sandalphon could fall on us at any time.

The Most High could change his mind. But if we subverted his most powerful entity…

  • Steve Davies desires to take over the world and remake it in his image. He will not let anything stop him from doing that. No fear of threats even from Sandalphon will dissuade him.

“That is interesting,” Lilith purred, peering over my shoulder. Her large breasts swayed over my head. “If you add one more line, he’ll gladly do whatever you say. Just type, ‘Steve Davies listens to everything his wife tells him because he desires to make her happy. He knows that to make her happy, he has to listen to her.’”

A wicked shudder rippled through me. It would be so easy to do that. A moment later, anger swelled.

I looked up at the demon, my eyes narrowing. “You don’t understand love at all.”

“Oh, I understand it,” she purred. Her hand stroked across my forehead. “It’s those hormones brimming in your brain, manipulating you, driving you to act in a predictable manner.”

“That’s lust.” I glared at her. “Love is something that transcends the flesh. My husband could have made me his slave. He could have made me his puppet, but instead, he gave me more freedom than I deserved, and you want me to repay him by making him my toy?”

Anger surged through me. I was done. I moved up to the COMPILE button at the top of the screen. I hit it and

YES

or

NO

appeared. I didn’t hesitate to hit yes. The changes rippled out of my phone. A warmth spread through the plastic as Lilith wavered and vanished. The changes slid over the world, over my husband.

The app on my phone vanished. My main screen appeared. All the icons of my installed apps appearing in their rows. One spot was missing. The editing app. I had my one use. I had done it. I had changed things for the better.

“Well?” Marissa asked. “Are you going to do it” She shifted beside me, pressing her breasts into my side.

“I just did it,” I said, this nervous writhe rippling through my stomach. What had I just done? Was it the right thing.

“Good,” Marissa said. She nuzzled against me. “You believed this was the right thing to do?”

“Yeah,” I said, setting my phone down on the nightstand. “I do.”

“Then it will all work out.”

I hoped so.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sam Davies

“Sam,” gasped JoBeth as I dragged her with me through the house. “What has you so excited?”

“Marissa is here!” I squealed. “Come on!”

My school uniform’s gray skirt whisked around my thighs. I had woken up at the crack of dawn. Earlier. I was so excited. I took my shower and got dressed and now I was eager to have so much fun. I licked my lips.

I dragged JoBeth from the concubine wing of the house, nodding to the Anime girls that were up and getting the house ready for the day. They were all so cute in their outfits. They were taken from their video games or anime or comic books or movies. There were two different versions of Wonder Woman running around, one based on the new movies and one based on the comic books. They both were sexy.

They should have sex with each other. Ooh, that would be hot.

I dragged JoBeth upstairs and to my parents’ master bedroom. I threw it open and found them all asleep. Mom was in the middle, Marissa on her right and Daddy on her left. I licked my lips at the sight of Marissa. I’d seen pics of her naked, her skin a lovely shade of tan, her hair curly and black. She had round breasts and suckable nipples and a shaved twat.

What did she taste like? I was about to find out.

“Wake them up with your kiss,” I told her. “That’ll energize them. Start with Marissa.”

“Fine,” JoBeth said. She headed to the bed and leaned over Marissa. As she bent down to kiss the sleeping woman, I yanked back the covers exposing all their sexy bodies. Mom was hugging Daddy in her sleep, her breasts pressed on his. Marissa was on her back, her left arm beneath Mom’s body like they fell asleep spooning then Marissa had rolled away.

JoBeth’s lips met Marissa’s.

The sexy woman gasped awake like she’d gotten a jolt of adrenaline. JoBeth’s kisses washed away fatigue. They were like energy drinks, only they didn’t taste nasty.

“What the fuck?” gasped Marissa then she jumped in startled shock as I dove between her thighs. “Holy shit, Sam?”

I plunged my tongue into her pussy, savoring her sweet delight. She shuddered as my tongue fluttered up and down her folds. I teased her, driving her wild. She groaned, her body shuddering beneath me.

“Oh, my god, Sam, what are you doing?” Marissa moaned as I devoured her pussy.

I stared up her body, her tan breasts jiggling as my tongue fluttered through her folds. Beside her, Mom came awake from JoBeth’s kiss, and now the naughty concubine was moving to plant one on Daddy’s mouth.

“Oh, my, Sam,” Mom purred. “Mmm, welcoming Marissa into the family?”

“She definitely is,” Marissa moaned. “Oh, my god, she’s only fourteen! That’s so hot. She’s young enough to be my daughter.”

“We are the same age,” Mom pointed out. “Don’t sound so surprised.”

I loved Marissa’s delight. I wrapped my arms around her thighs and pulled her tight against me. My pussy was getting hot, but I didn’t care. I was having too much fun eating her out while Mom and Daddy watched me. I felt my parents’ eyes on me eat out their new wife’s pussy.

That meant Marissa was like my step-mom or something. This was almost incest.

My tongue danced through her folds. I teased her as I feasted on her. She gasped and moaned, her body trembling as I devoured her. I licked and lapped at her. Her body humped against me. She gasped and groaned, her head tossing back and forth. Her pussy cream spilled over my mouth, the flavor so yummy.

A naughty delight.

My tongue darted through her folds. I licked at her. I lapped at her. She shuddered on the mattress. Her mouth humped against my twat. Her breasts jiggled. This wonderful heat rushed through me. My pussy ached. It was a treat to enjoy. My tongue darted through her folds.

“Oh, wow, Sam!” gasped my step-mom. “Oh, your daughter is naughty, Linda.”

“Mmm, she’s your daughter now,” my mom said.

“She’s a naughty minx,” Daddy said. “Aren’t you, kumquat?”

“Just the naughtiest,” I moaned into Marissa’s cunt.

She gasped and moaned as my tongue whipped through her pussy lips. I gathered up her sweet cream. Her head tossed back and forth from the pleasure I gave her. She whimpered and moaned as my tongue brushed her clit.

Her passion inspired me. I sucked and nibbled on her clit. My new step-mom humped against my face. She smeared that wonderful pussy across my mouth. It was a treat to enjoy. To feast on her sweet cunt.

A pure delight to experience.

“I’m going to cum on your mouth, Sam!” my step-mother moaned.

“Mmm, yes,” Mom purred, squirming in Daddy’s arms. “This is better than TV.”

“Our own live porn put on by our daughter,” Daddy said, his hands squeezing Mom’s big tits.

“Yep!” I moaned. “SamTV, the best place for porn in the world!”

Marissa gasped as my mouth sucked on her clit. I held her tight to me, my tongue darting around her folds. She whimpered, her breast jiggling. They were so delicious. I shot my right hand up her body and grabbed one.

I kneaded her plump mound as I sucked on her clit. Her juices soaked my lips and chin. The scent of her sweet cream filled my nose. I squeezed her breast. My schoolgirl uniform rustled about me as I squirmed, my skirt swaying, caressing my thighs.

My cunt was on fire.

“Oh, Sam, you’re going to make me cum!” my step-mom moaned.

“Good!” I purred, squeezing her boob.

My tongue danced through her folds. I licked and lapped at her. I plundered my tongue deep into her cunt. She gasped. Her pussy clenched down on my tongue while her thighs squeezed about my face. She ground against me, showing off how hot I made her. Which drove me wild to feast on her with such hunger.

“Wow,” JoBeth said, peering down. “You’re so good at this, Sam.”

“She is!” Marissa moaned. “Oh, I don’t know you, sweetie.”

“JoBeth,” the brunette girl said. “I’m one of the concubines.”

“Daddy bred her!” I moaned and then sucked on Marissa’s clit again.

The sexy woman gasped. Her body bucked. Her pussy smeared hot against my mouth. I squeezed her boob as I felt her building towards that wonderful orgasm. My parents watched with hunger in their eyes as I feasted on their new wife.

I loved the taste of Marissa’s passion. I licked and lapped up her cream. My new step-mother shuddered. I found her clit and nibbled on it again. I pinched her nipple at the same moment. Marissa gasped sharply.

Then she cried out in rapture.

“Sam!”

Hot pussy cream flooded out of her. I licked and lapped up the wonderful treat. I closed my eyes, savoring it pouring over my cheeks and chin. That yummy, spicy musk filled my nose. I reveled in it as her pussy juices gushed out of her.

I licked and lapped them up. I savored every drop of her orgasmic passion. That sweet delight melted on my tongue as she thrashed on the bed. My parents groaned. I put on such a naughty show for them.

“Sam! Oh, my god, Sam!” the sexy Marissa panted. “Oh, god, you are your mother’s daughter. The way you eat pussy…”

I lifted my head and beamed at her. “Thank you!”

I threw myself up her body and planted a fertile kiss on her lips. I felt that tingle rush out of me as her tongue lapped up her own cream off my mouth. I shuddered atop her, my schoolgirl uniform rustling.

Then, feeling wicked, I rolled off of her and grabbed JoBeth’s hand. “Well, good morning! Need to get ready for school.”

“Oh, god, but I need more!” Marissa moaned. “Steve, I need your cock in me. I’m going to have to go all day without it, so give it to me.”

I smiled as I watched Daddy slip over Mom and mount his new wife. There would be another baby coming in nine months. I loved it. As Daddy rammed his cock into Marissa’s fertile pussy, my cunt clenched.

I closed the door and grinned at JoBeth. “Now, did you pay close attention to how I ate her pussy?”

The cute brunette nodded her head, her little titties jiggling.

I pulled up my skirt, exposing the pink panties I wore. They had small, silver rings at the hips, connecting the two halves of the narrow waistband. “Then show me. Get down on your knees and eat me out.”

She did.

I smiled as Becky emerged naked from our bedroom and smiled at me as she headed to the bathroom, her long braid of dark-red hair swaying down her back. I shuddered and enjoyed the bliss of this house.

It was amazing. I loved it.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Linda Davies

I was nervous on the drive to school. Last night, I edited him. Steve was driving us instead of using one of the Anime girls. He was glancing at the town, smiling at the sense of community that seemed to be growing around us. He had a look of joy in his eyes. He had changed this town for the better.

We passed one of the new nuclear plants. It still made me a little nervous, but everyone had overridden me on that. I had to trust Becky that this would work. Just like I had to trust myself. I did this for my husband. For my family. My edit wasn’t selfish. That had to be a difference. I did this for love.

Wasn’t that the greatest power in the universe. Faith, Hope, and Love, it said in the bible. And the greatest of them was Love.

“You okay?” Steve asked as we neared Rainier Christian High.

“Yeah, just… Marissa being here has me excited.”

He smiled and patted my knee. “I know it does. I’m glad I did this for us.” He squeezed my thigh through my nurse’s scrubs. “Besides, I bet you’ll have a schoolgirl cutie showing up to the nurse’s office to calm you down.”

“Hopefully,” I said, my stomach whirling. I just wanted this to be over. I hoped this worked. That Steve would edit Sandalphon by days end.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Steve Davies

I sat down naked at my desk in my classroom. I was used to going naked in here. I had grown comfortable being nude before my students. The boys didn’t notice, and the girls loved it. They squirmed, getting juicy. I usually enjoyed one per lesson, but not always. I did enjoy teaching, and often just had a girl sucking on my cock.

Of course, two of my concubines were in my first class. Nikkole and Kyleigh were making out, fondling each other’s naked tits. I unfolded the Seattle Post-Intelligencer for today and smiled at the top headline.

Olympia Lawmakers Propose Law to Legalize Bigamy, Incest, and Lower Age of Consent

I smiled as I read the article. It was all about the rumor of new laws that were percolating out of various lawmakers’ offices in Olympia. I had edited the State Capitol last night. There was a law to encourage the expansion of nuclear power, of common sense ideas to help out those in need. The author wrote it like it was all so important. After all, he was living in Seattle, another city I’d edited.

Things were going great.

My class filed in as Nikkole moaned, getting her pussy eaten out by Kyleigh. I let them have their fun as I launched into my English lesson. My students were eager. Seth was in class. My former enemy had no idea that he even once held the power to edit reality. He was just a happy high school student who had a pair of girlfriends.

I made sure he was happy after I crushed him.

I was just a nice guy. It was easier than punishing someone. This Seth was a different guy than the one who tried to take away my powers.

My next hour was a free one for me. I had a hot time with Nikkole, Kyleigh, and Babette. The French girl screamed her head off on my cock while Nikkole and Kyleigh sucked on her nipples. I wrote her a note to excuse her before sending her to her next class with a pussy full of my cum.

During lunch, Linda was distracted. She kept glancing at me like she expected something from me. I wanted to draw it out of her, but our daughters and concubines were with us, all of us eating in my classroom. The girls were talking and laughing. JoBeth was fitting in with the others.

I kept glancing at my wife. She just would give me tight smiles. It was clear she was worried about something. I wanted to pry it out of her. I thought about just opening the app and seeing what it was. I could find out everything she was thinking if I wanted to.

It felt like a violation. Like snooping through her phone because I didn’t trust her. I did. So looking at her through the app would be even more of a violation. It would be piercing through her privacy. She’d tell me when she was ready.

Hopefully.

I took her hand as the others filed out and squeezed it. “Whatever it is, it’ll be fine.”

“I know,” she said. “I just feel like something is going to happen. Something momentous.”

“What?”

She shrugged. “I don’t know. I’m probably just being silly. You know, things are going great, so I guess I’m waiting for that other shoe to drop.”

“For another editor to show up and challenge us?” I grinned at her. “I can just edit him. I’d have more powers. I won’t let anything stop what we’re doing.”

“I know that.” She smiled and kissed me. “It’s going to work out. I can feel it.”

I enjoyed my wife while our daughters and concubines watched, cheered, and fingered each other. I sent my wife to her nurse’s office with a pussy full of cum. I hoped she hadn’t had her girl for the day, because that lucky teenager would get a delicious creampie to enjoy.

I enjoyed Kizzy during my fourth period. She had a tight asshole and gasped out in rapture as she came on my dick. Her bowels rippled around my cock. My balls tightened. And then they flooded her with cum. She had such a happy smile on her face as she headed back to sit by her boyfriend. She absently took his hand while my cum leaked out of her bowels. It felt amazing.

During my fifth class, I enjoyed Shahrazad Darzi sucking my dick clean. She cleaned Kizzy’s asshole off my shaft with hunger. Shahrazad stared up at me as she blew me. She had such a look of joy in her eyes as she cleaned my cock and swallowed my cum with hunger.

Then I launched into my lecture on Shakespeare’s King Leer, teaching my students, having fun. I enjoyed this more than being mayor, which I would have to do once school was over. I had to go and do my duties for the town.

Soon, I would have to give up teaching as my power grew. Maybe that was why spending more time lecturing than enjoying the various cuties.

My students filed out of the classroom. I frowned, realizing that Stefan Roydon had left a book on his desk. It wasn’t a textbook. It was a large paperback. I turned it around and saw that it was a book on Christian Theology. I turned it around, picking it up.

“Mr. Davies!” JoBeth purred as she entered the classroom. My concubine was in my final class of the day. She was already stripping out of her sweater vest, exposing her white blouse and gray tie she wore beneath. She quickly doffed the rest of her uniform. “How’s it going?”

“Not bad,” I said. “Fucked Kizzy up the ass and had Shahrazad suck my dick clean.”

“Hot,” she said, licking her lips. “Can I suck your dick? I need some cum in me. You know, because of my condition.” The minx rubbed her belly.

“It’s a little early for you to have any pregnancy craving,” I said.

“So?”

I winked at her.

She hurried over and fell to her knees beneath me. I groaned as she sucked me. My thumb flipped through the book. I hadn’t read this one. I used to devour books on Christian Theology. I taught them to some of my classes. My dick throbbed in JoBeth’s mouth.

Since gaining my app, I’d learned that what I believed about the Most High and what he did weren’t quite the same. It was like things had changed since the bible was penned. Like someone had edited reality but the Bible had missed the ripples or something.

“Damn!” I gasped as JoBeth’s mouth sucked hard on my dick. Her tongue danced around my cock, sending a jolt. My twitching fingers stopped the pages flipping. My heart pounded through my body. My balls tightened.

My eyes fell on the chapter title. “On the Allegory of the Garden of Eden.”

Beneath it was the picture of an angel with a flaming sword standing before a gate. I groaned as that picture, that name, struck me. Eden… My heart pounded in my chest as I shook. I stared hard at the angel standing before the gate. It had a bright sword with fire dancing around it. Just like Sandalphon.

Didn’t Anael mention that Sandalphon guarded the Gates of Eden to keep Adam and Eve from re-entering? I shuddered, JoBeth sucking hard on my cock. The pleasure surged through me as this strange leap of intuition stuck me. It electrified my body like a jolt of lightning had thundered down and struck me.

I shuddered as my balls tightened. JoBeth sucked on me as I trembled. It couldn’t be his real name. Eden… The place where everything began. The place where the Most High walked on the earth. A garden was highly symbolic. A place of plants, so it represented the natural world, but it wasn’t wild. It was placed where men had tamed it, planted the various flowers, bushes, and trees in specific locations. It represented how the chaos of the world was brought into order. Sandalphon was the Angel of Death and Destruction. He was an agent of chaos.

Yet he was tamed by the Most High, his devastation directed in a focused, controlled manner.

“Damn,” I moaned.

I set the book down and looked around for my phone. It was right there on the desk. I wanted to go for it, but I had JoBeth’s hot, warm, teenage mouth wrapped around my dick. My cock throbbed and ached in her mouth. My hands slid through her curly, brown hair. Her green eyes glowed as she stared up at me, the freckles on her cheeks almost dancing when she sucked.

The pleasure was incredible. The surge of excitement lanced through my body. I held my concubine’s head tight and fucked her mouth. Was this it? Had I found what I needed? Could I edit Sandalphon?

I had to edit him for my family’s future. I couldn’t let anything stop me from remaking the world in my image. To make a world for all my children to live in and find happiness. I shuddered, my hips thrusting forward hard and fast.

I hit the back of JoBeth’s throat and kept going. My concubine gasped in shock as she felt my dick sliding down her gullet. She didn’t fight me. She surrendered to me as she deep-throated her first cock. She took more and more of my dick down her tight esophagus.

She moaned. The humming bliss surged around my cock. I groaned, loving the feel of it. This heady rush shot through me. I shuddered, my heart pounding in my chest. This fiery heat surged through me. My balls grew tighter and tighter. Pleasure built in my nuts.

“Damn,” I grunted as her lips pressed into my pubic hair. Her nose nuzzled into the dark curls. Her green eyes shone. “This is it.”

She moaned louder.

That buzz of her passion rippled around my cock. A wonderful thrill. I drew back my hips, her mouth sucking the entire way. The pleasure reached down into my balls. They grew heavier and heavier with the rush of exhilaration surging through me, feeding on the feel of JoBeth’s amazing throat.

I slammed my cock down her throat again. My nutsack smacked into her chin. The meaty sound echoed. She whimpered. Her hands grabbed my hips. Her fingernails bit into my flesh. She worshiped me. Such a good concubine.

I was glad I had her. All of them.

“Our child is going to have a bright future,” I growled, thrusting my cock hard and fast down her gullet. My balls smacked into her chin, my wiry bush spilling over her lips and nose at the end of every thrust. I savored the way her mouth sucked at my cock as I drew back for the next plunge.

It was incredible. Amazing. I pumped away at her delicious mouth, savoring the wet, tight warmth of her throat. It was this incredible rush. A power that surged through me. It was an amazing passion. A delight that built and built in my nuts. A power that would explode through my body.

I would fire my cum down her throat. I would flood her stomach. She sucked so hard. She moaned. She loved my cock plunging down her gullet. My balls smacked into her chin over and over, the cum swelling the pressure in them.

“JoBeth, you’ll see!” I growled. “There will be paradise on Earth!”

She moaned in delight. She sucked hard at my cock. Her eyes squeezed tight. She trembled and moaned. Her cheeks hollowed with every plunge down her throat. Her esophagus massaged me as she swallowed. It was incredible.

I rammed to hilt down her gullet again, soaking in the warmth of her mouth and throat. My balls tightened. Twitched. My cock erupted. Pleasure slammed through my body as I pumped my jizz straight into JoBeth’s belly.

“Oh, fuck, yes!” I groaned. “JoBeth, we’re going to change the world. We’re going to make it into a better place.”

She whimpered in delight. She sucked hard on my cock, her throat working around my shaft as my cum spurted into her stomach. The heady rush shot through me. I held her tight as the dizzying pleasure reached a peak in me.

I threw back my head as rapture held me at the pinnacle of ecstasy. One perfect second of bliss suffused me.

I panted as I came down from heaven. I ripped my cock out of her mouth and moaned, “You are perfect, JoBeth. I love you.”

“I love… you… Mr. Davies…” she panted, drool running down her chin. She patted her naked belly. “Mmm, thank you.”

I winked at her and then rushed to my desk. I grabbed my phone and opened the app. Anael and Jophiel appeared. I wasn’t surprised to find Anael licking Jophiel’s pussy. The Angel of Sexuality never could get enough.

“You look like something momentous has happened, Master,” gasped Jophiel.

“Maybe,” I said and did a search. I shuddered as I found him. Sandalphon. He was locked, requiring a password. I stared at the muscular physique of the angel, his flaming sword in the picture. I could see the restrained violence in him. Discipline tamed the beast in us. Order imposed on Chaos.

I typed in the password: E D E N

He unlocked.

“Holy fucking shit,” I said, a hot tremble racing through me. I backed out immediately. I had no edits left for the day. I would have to wait until midnight for them to refresh.

“What is it, Master?” Jophiel asked, pushing Anael’s head away. “You look… unnerved.”

I shook my head, feeling a sword poised to strike me. Did Sandalphon know I had discovered his real name? “Just an idea. Not sure it will work.”

“Well, discuss it with me, Master,” Jophiel said.

“Are you talking to the angels?” JoBeth asked. She came up beside me as the other students were filing in. I hadn’t noticed them during the blowjob. Girls were getting naked, guys oblivious to everything.

“Yeah,” I said. “It’s okay, Jophiel. You and Anael have your fun.” I closed the app and they faded away.

My dick still throbbed. I grinned at JoBeth as the class set down. She smiled back, arching her eyebrows at me. My hand slid down to cup her cute rump and give it a squeeze. Her green eyes lit up in understanding.

She was a good and loving concubine. She came hard as I fucked her asshole.

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Linda Davies

It was the end of the day. It should have worked. I trembled as I walked into his classroom, feeling the need to get naked. It just felt wrong to wear clothes in here. I absently pulled off my nurse’s scrubs as I stared at my husband. JoBeth was sitting on his lap, looking happy. My husband had this look in his eyes.

He glanced at me and I shivered. He’d done it. He’d figured it out.

“What?” I asked him, my stomach roiling. Please, please let this have worked.

He looked around and motioned me closer. “JoBeth, why don’t you find the others. I need to get to City Hall. Zelda should be driving you all home.”

“Sure, Mr. Davies,” she said. She gave him a kiss and hopped off his lap. She darted towards her clothes, his cum matting her butt-crack.

I took her place on my husband’s lap. “What is it, Steve? You look like you saw a ghost.”

He leaned in and whispered into my ear, “I figured out Sandalphon’s real name. Eden.”

I blinked. I never would have thought to try Eden. Why that name? Why not something martial like Sampson? I squirmed on him, feeling his cock beneath me. I leaned in and nuzzled into my husband’s ear. “What are you going to do, Mr. Mayor.”

“Edit him. I can’t have anything stop me from remaking the world for our family.”

I beamed. “I agree.”

As I kissed him, joy surged through my heart. It worked. I did it. I had ensured nothing could harm us or our children. Steve would do just what he said. The world would be a paradise for everyone. Especially our family.

To be continued…

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9 thoughts on “Editing Reality Book Three, Chapter Twelve: Wife’s Naughty Edits

  1. Alex

    It somehow feels too ideal at the moment, but fun to read. When Sam wakes up Marissa and licks her you have some strange lines. Suddenly there is a cock involved and it sounds like Marissa would lick Sam.

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  2. Alex

    The story seems a bit too optimistic at the moment unless we are already nearing the (happy) end. But for me it feels like we will have to face another bigger problem soon.

    In the segment where Sam wakes up and licks Melissa you messed it up a bit. There is suddenly a cock involved and one specific sentence reads as if Melissa licks Sam, that she doesn’t.

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    1. mypenname3000 Post author

      Your first comment got held up in moderation. Not sure why.
      well, optimistic. That’s one way to look at things. 😀

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      1. Alex

        Sorry for this, I have troubles with one of my browsers and to me this scenario was as likely as it was that the browser hadn’t completed the transfer in the first place.

        Another quick question: Steve had edited his classroom so he can fool around without consequences (especially pregnancies). And JoBeth wanted Steve to be the father of her kiss-induced child. How was this even possible in his classroom? Or in other words: How comes that one edit can overrule another without exact wording while editing. I would expect that he must have written it specifically so that the kiss can work despite other edits (and whether Steve thought about this or not is hard to say for me but I would assume he didn’t in absence of experience of previous competing edits). Sadly, you weren’t very verbose when describing the kiss-ability in chapter three.

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    1. Alex

      Sure, Linda just used her demonic editing powers and – as we all know – this might back-fire as the devil rarely plays by the rules. And if this happens this is probably what I was waiting for. But if we put this possibility aside, the situation can’t be any better:
      – he has no human opponents. All other humans with editing powers either used up their powers or got their powers taken away. Unless we weren’t informed about some other human player, Steve is the only one with powers and by now he has learned enough that it’s unlikely that some human without powers can overrule him or even kill him intentionally.
      – he has unlocked the opposing angel. And given that this angel hasn’t yet interfered it’s almost save to say that the angel doesn’t know yet (if he knew, why wait and not interfere right away). So by midnight Steve will edit the angel and the only threat left is God’s direct interference.
      – this wasn’t exactly what Steve has planned but given how Steve has affected other humans Linda’s edits are rather little based on their changes. And even if Steve wouldn’t agree with them, the angel is not the reason for this disagreement anymore. (Steve only feared the power of this angel. Given that he WANTS to change the world and would have been able to even without Jophiel he already aggregated more powers than necessary so why not just make use of another angel, too)

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