Hey everyone

Just finished my rough draft of Chapter 22. I’ve never finished a chapter so fast. It’s the middle of a three chapter arc that starts with Chapter 21. Plan on starting 23 today. 22 just wrote itself.

After I post this, I’m going to do my second draft of Chapter 21. My plan is to post it Saturday Morning. I like to do three edits/drafts of a chapter. I like to wait a day between edits to give myself some perspective on what I wrote the day before.

Also, if there are any Side-Story ideas you guys have, characters you’d like to find out about, suggestions are welcomed.

Everyone have a great week

J.

Hey

Taking a break from writing chapter 21. I should post Chapter 20 tomorrow. Just have to finish editing it. With Chapter 20, most of the pieces are in place to get the plot moving and leads in to chapter 21: The Glassners. We’ve met Mary’s family, now its time to meet Mark’s. David, the abusive father, Sandy, the long suffering mother, and Antsy, the little sister that’s Sister Theodora’s trap.

Here’s a little preview of Chapter 20: Tryouts. The day has come for Mark to recruit his cadre of sexy cops for his bodyguard.

By noon, thirty-four female cops had assembled, standing at attention in the grassy field of Sparks Stadium. All were dressed in their uniforms, a mix of blues and browns, representing all the Law Enforcement Agencies of Pierce County. They ranged from as young as nineteen fresh out of the academy to their late twenties. Most were White, but there was a smattering of Black, Latina, and Asians in the group.

I stepped up onto the small step-stool Thamina brought and faced my recruits. “I am Mark Glassner. Besides me stands Mary Sullivan. Whatever we do is legal! Do whatever we tell your or someone who says, ‘I serve Mark Glassner!’ Do you understand!”

“Sir, yes, sir!” the woman yelled back.

“Good!” I nodded. “Today, you are trying out to be our bodyguards. Your captains and chiefs no why you are here today! I want all of you to do your best. You all want nothing more than to please Mary and I!”

“Sir, yes, sir!” It was intoxicating, all these women obeying me, ready to do whatever filthy thing I wished. My cock stirred in my shorts.

Take care everyone,

J.

While writing chapter 20 today, I realized that I was typing Samantha for Mary’s older sister who is named Shannon. Samantha is Mark’s sister’s full name, although she usually goes by Antsy. So i went back to my draft of Chapter 19 and realized about a quarter of the way through the draft I started calling her Samantha. Thank god for the find/replace option.

Apparently this is an issue i have. In chapter 18 I called Mark’s friend Karl by Kurt a few times. A reader caught it and pointed it out to me. I need to pay more attention i guess.

Hope to have Chapter 19 posted on Sunday and on Monday a short story tentatively called First Webcast, following up on Cynthia and Vivian from Chapter One and the command Mark gave them at the end of the chapter.

Hope everyone has a great day

J.

Hey everyone

I finished my first draft of Chapter 19: The Sullivans this morning. It’ll take me a couple of days to do the editing. I like to have a day between drafts, give myself a bit of distances.

I think next I’m going to write a side-story I’ve been wanting to write since the beginning. I always had plans to write about characters that had their lives changed by Mark. It should be a short one, about Cynthia and Virginia, the other two women from Chapter 1. I hope to write it in a day.

I had a rough day at work. I’m in the para-transportation business and a regular told yesterday he had inoperable brain and lung cancer. I like my job, it can be quite rewarding helping disable people get around, but its sucks when passengers you like die.

Anyway, here’s a preview of Chapter 19:

“It’s okay, babydoll,” Mary whispered and gently nudged Missy into the bathroom and closed the door. “Mark’s a real man,” Mary continued, whispering in her sister’s ear. They were the same height and Mary wrapped her arms around her sister and pressed against her back. “And a real man takes who he wants when he wants it.”

“But, but,” Missy tried to protest, her thoughts scattered by the situation.

“Go ahead, watch a real man fuck,” Mary purred. “Watch a real man take his pleasure from a naughty little slut who’s going to get her bottom paddled.”

Well, I hope everyone has a good day, J.

 Just finished my first edit of the side-story Mark Goes Back to School. Its about all the fun he had at high school searching for those girls. It was always a fantasy of mine when I was a teenager to go into a girls locker room and enjoy the lusty teens i found there. Of course, in real life you don’t get to do those sort of things, which is why I like to write dirty stories.

I’ve also began chapter 19, where we finally get to meet Mary’s sisters and see what sort of fun Mark can get up too with the Sullivan girls in his bed.

Anyways, the blog is still a work in progress as I add the previous chapters to the sight. It’s boring work, making sure I got all the formatting right, so I have to do it in small sections, a few chapters at a time. Hopefully, by the end of the week they’ll be all up. This way, if XNXX has that issue it had last week where no stories were posting right, or if ASSTR decides to go offline for another four days, there will still be a place that I can post chapters that is under my control.

Here’s a preview from Mark Goes Back to School

“Well, which girl in here’s the sluttiest?” I asked. Most of the class pointed to a slightly chubby girl in the back with a cute face, named Addison. “Well, slut, bend over the desk and let these guys bust their first nut.”

“Sure,” Addison answered excitedly, and I blinked. The girl seemed excited and pulled down her panties and flipped up her skirt and the first virgin teenage boy started pumping away at her while the other four virgins watched, excited to finally get to fuck a girl’s pussy, and jealous of their classmate who beat them to it. Addison moaned wantonly. “Ohh, such a nice cock! I love a cock up my naughty snatch! Umm, harder, harder, stud!”

Well, everyone have a nice day, J.

I just finished editing chapter 18, i should post it tomorrow morning. I’m starting to work on the Devil’s Pact Side-Story of Mark at the High School looking for those virgins. I hope to finish writing it today, so I can start writing chapter 19. I’ve been looking forward to 19 for a while, Mary’s finally going to get with her sisters.

I had a good Sunday, my Seahawks trounced the Falcons. Only wished they played this well last year at Atlanta. Oh well, we’re going to the Super Bowl this year. 9 and 1 that is a great record.