Hello. I’m just a guy who likes to write. And who enjoys dirty stories. So, I’ve decided to write my own. Hope you enjoy them and remember they all are fiction. Comments are welcomed at my_petrn_name3000@hotmail.com. All stories copyrighted by me 2013-2015.
The World of Erasthay
A fantastical world populated by monsters and knights, wizards and demons, and all hosts of races, creatures, and denizens. Read the sexy, exciting tales of the heroes and villains, monsters and gods that love and fight, live and die.
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A prophecy threatens a king’s life. Angela, a knight, and Sophia, a lesbian acolyte, are plunged into danger, adventure, and intrigue when they leave on a quest to kill a dragon.
800 years before the Knight and the Acolyte, a roguish adventure, his sexy priestess sister, a catgirl sex slave, a wicked princess, a playful faerie, and a hermaphroditic warrior are embroiled in the schemes of a despot and a cruel naga!
1 year after the Knight and the Acolyte, the Lawbreaker desires to upend the celestial order. He plots the death of Pater, Father of All. A group of unlikely characters are drawn into the fight to stop him. Monica, pregnant with Pater’s demigod child, is about to learn the power growing inside of her. Sir Bryce, Paladin of Lagu, is dedicated to the preservation of the Law. Illina, a playful thief, has dreams of outshining her dead mother’s achievements. Barg, a shapeshifting monster, will uphold a vow made to a dead friend. Stefan, a failed mage, will awaken to the promise of his blood. Ahlona, a radiant angel, shall be a guide to destiny. Lady Alloria, a vain noblewoman, only craves to possess riches.
Years and years after the The Knight and the Acolyte, the Las, God of Lust, is held in bondage by his daughter, Throwia, Goddess of Suffering. Meanwhile, three of his children live on a tropical island with their family. Kurtis, Las’s son, dreams of something more.
The paladin Seamus leads his wives, a pair of twin sisters connected by fate, on naughty adventures!
A collection of smaller series set in the World of Erasthay!
Hey so I’m curious are you gonna flesh out the world of Erasthay more when the nations and organizations in it? Are you gonna make any stories set in that world?
I should. It’s just a time thing. And yes, when the Tyrant’s Daughter finishes up, I’ll start releasing the World of Erasthay. I have one main, long story and several short stories set throughout the world that have nothing to do with the main story.
Hello. Just wondering when the next chapters for these stories are gonna be out.
Knight and the Acolyte today. Triad tomorrow. I was going to post the Triad yesterday, but I just was too busy to do it.
Eager for the knight and acolyte to come out.
On Thursday. I release once a week for now.
Hey Mypenname3000, wonderful stories here, the perfect mix of fantasy, story and sex!
I noticed that the list of The Knight and the Acolyte chapters all say they were posted in 2015 (which we know isn’t the case). Just wanted to tell you, because I’d imagine a new reader might get confused.
Thanks Vesh. Glad you like the stories. And I’ve fixed the dates.
Just read “The Mermaid’s Courtship” and I’m very anxious for more. Thanks for your work.
The final part is coming. I’m writing the next Vampire Kiss chapter right now.
I’m really enjoying this series. A thought I had was, if it was, say, cleaned up just a little bit (not that I would ever complain about it not being) it would make a good setting for, or even its own, role playing game. Kinda like D&D, among others. I can see the universe worked into D&D rules with just some minor rules changes. Any thoughts on that subject?
It is intentionally similar to a D&D party. I think of the characters by their class. We have our fighter (Angela), our cleric (Sophia), our ranger (Xera), our Barbarian (Thrak), our wizard (Faoril), and there’s a bard, a rogue, and a druid to recruit. All the races are your standard generic fantasy i.e. D&D settings. I used to play a lot of D&D and I chose a generic fantasy setting so that there would be some amount of familiarity with it so I could have more time for the sex.
Hi mypenname3000.
Thought leaving a comment here is as good a place as any. I stumbled upon your work via the front page of ASSTR and have been completely hooked on it since. I’m busy working my way through the main Erasthay story and have read the side ones. I’m astonished at the consistent high quality of your, its crazy to see something this good being offered for free. I’m very impressed.
On a more specific note, do you have any plans for more stories involving the triad? I’m quite taken with those characters and the dynamics of the relationship although my favourite of your stories so far has to be the unicorn one for its sheer inventiveness.
Thanks for all your work!
Glad you enjoyed the story and like my writing. I do want to write more Triad stories and other ones. Once I finish writing the Knight and the Acolyte, I’ll probably write more.
I love you stories, man. Sheer creativity!
Thanks!
When are you going to update again?
Shortly. The Knight and the Acolyte is updated every Thursday.
Admittedly I have enjoyed your writings for a while. However, for some reason I have delayed in starting any of the Erasthay works. Now that its done, I was thinking of reading them. Is there any recommended order for the side stories and how they incorporate into the main K&A storyline?
Other than the three Triad stories which involve the same characters and should be read in their publication order, the side-stories have no impact on each other or The Knight and the Acolyte. They just take place in the same world. The Triad stories for instance take place 800 years before the main story. There are a few references to the Triad stories in the main series, you meet a descendant of those characters, but it’s nothing that would spoil either stories by reading first.
Just finished the series and had a few thoughts. First off is house keeping. There are some dead links at the end of some chapters which don’t take you to the next chapter (this might primarily be in the triad series but I seem to remember it in k&a too). There are also a few chapters in books 8-10 that don’t have links to the next chapter at all. Not a big deal but thought you should be aware.
Second issue is a nitpick. Have your proof reader watch for hominims, things like knight vs. night came up a few times throughout and you may want to go back through if you plan on doing a smashwords release like devil’s pact.
Ok, main story. Well done. As others have mentioned, it has a very D&D feel but with added sex. For the most part the character arcs and sex scenes did seem to build well and had purpose. It was rare that a scene seemed unnecessary when viewed as part of the whole.
The only real issue I had with the story was the Delilah arc at the end. Without spoiling it for anyone dumb enough to read this far I will say I’m surprised at how gullible she was when presented with her “betrayal”. I get that x number of years suppressing her nature was a factor, but one would think that after the alter of souls she would have able to see through it.
The other issue I took was Xera’s betrayal. While hinted at throughout the story, it seemed like it was the least necessary other than to tie up loose ends. Perhaps had there been more enmity in that triangle in the beginning then it would have seemed more reasonable or apropos.
Apart from those frankly minor issues I would just have to say congratulations on finishing a great story. You put a ton of time and effort into this and it shows. The ending seems like it was a struggle but they always are and given the complexity of the characters I don’t know that you could have done much differently and had a satisfying outcome.
Well, I’m glad you enjoyed the story. I will definitely have someone proofread before publishing. Sorry some of the story didn’t work with you. I think for Delilah seeing it was more visceral than hearing about it. And out slipped her true nature before she could even think. If I was thinking, I would have put in some signs that turning into a dragon and attacking the army to save Angela had caused her to slip in her control and she was still fighting to get it back. But I didn’t.
You know you have an excellent story when readers find themselves kind of fast-forwarding through sex scenes that don’t advance the plot. Excellent mine candy all around. I look forward to reading more of your work, and I would love to see some origin stories for the more interesting characters. Thyrna, and the Doge’s faerie, immediately come to mind. Also, Thrak and Faoril’s travels.
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the story. The place Thyrna is from is covered in the story The Rakshasa’s Heart and if you read the Rogue’s Harem, that faerie is in it. The Rogue’s Harem takes place 800 years before the Knight and the Acolyte, so you can meet her before she gets captured and see where she’s from. I probably will write Thrak and Faoril’s travels on day. I want to develop the Eastern stuff more.
After you finish Rogue’s Harem are you continuing in the same universe?
I am taking a break. I’m doing a series I call Editing Reality set in modern times with a guy who gets the ability to basically hack reality and rewrite it.
I thought you would figure this out yourself over time, but as you are still doing this one wrong: All Book 3 chapters of the Harem story are titled “Book 2” on this index page except for chapter one of book 3 that says “Book 1”.
Another idea: would it be possible to put something like a list of contents at the top of those index pages that link / move browser-focus to the several story lists? This page and devil’s pact are quite lengthy and if the first segment of the page would be a listing of the different parts you could directly jump to the right segment. In case I’m not completely clear yet, for this page this would be:
– The Knight and the Acolyte
– The Rogue’s Harem
– The Triad and the Kidnapped Virgins
– … and so on
Okay I fixed the horribly embarrasing mistake that shows I just copy and paste the previous chapter’s stuff for the next, LOL.
What you’re suggesting is to use anchor tags. It never occurred to me. Check out the world of Erasthay now. See if that’s what you mean.
That’s just what I meant, awesome. Although I would prefer to have an anchor for every segment and not just for some, but this is just my personal opinion. There are rarely too many segments, so having individual anchors for each one won’t create overly large lists.
Yeah, I got you on the ancors. It’s just time consuming and tedious. I just whipped something up real quick. I’ll try to get the time to do it soon.
This is more than I had expected, hence, nothing else would be appropriate than to say: absolutely awesome, nice work.
And keep on writing! Your stories definitely deserve the same appreciation.
Glad you like it. When I have time, I’ll work on the other glossaries. Thanks for the compliment.